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Wish I Could
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Wish I Could |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WISH I COULD” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I wish I could be someone else, the someone else you want, but I can’t, I’m just me… ~~~~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, And actually "that's all I want to be".  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
if i change to be what you need to see not only will i still lose you i truly lose me helen |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Bill, I know just how you feel, for many times peers of mine always want me to change, and want me to be someone else, but I always feel so unhappy when I try to impose the way they do, for I know just being yourself is the most wonderful thing to do. (sigh) As long as we stay true to what we believe in, we will find happiness in ourselves! (big hugggsssssss) Short but with such a beautiful message, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just be yourself Bill! We love you just the way you are~  ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well said...but you will have your own blessings...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Well if that don't do it I don't know what will. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* your yearning for her comes out clearly in these tender words from the heart. Well done. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it one of my favorite from you |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Life changes people, but we still go on, thinking that this is who we are. The people that once loved us do not want to put up with the change, not realizing that they've changed, too. Short, simple. Touching. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill C. I know this feeling...I have felt it... Sometimes we all wish we could do that.. but...I never have been able to...Just have to be me... Nicely done. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
please be yourself.....as we like you that way but I recognize the feeling very well. (hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill dearest friend don’t ever change, you are you and that is why you are unique. If we were whom others wanted we wouldn’t be anything other than their shadow dreams. Truly outstanding writing Kid. I love it Can’t we all identify with this one? If I was someone other than me Would you stay happily? Would I hold your gaze? With a touch of amaze If I were someone other than me? If I were someone else instead Wouldn’t the me of me be dead? Would you stare with delight At my altered sight If I were someone else instead?    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Bill, I have felt this way, but it usually passes quickly, cause guess what, we are good the way we are, and if someone else disagrees, they are missing, not us. (Thats the new, strong, Sandra here) Peace |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
A love a poem that tells it like it is. Great job. Roger |
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