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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-12-15 11:55 AM

Vision of you,
Visions of love,
Pictured us a rainbow,
Above the skies,
Give you my heart,
The day
I said I loved you,
Give you my heart,
Because I love you
all my heart,
The clouds hidden the rainbow,
when we danced together
In the rain,
You promised me
As I promised my love
to you
All the love you gave
Surrounded me,
Give you my heart
and love that was made a promise by us,
Give you my heart,
and all ,love to you,
Give you my heart,
And love,
Never wanted to end this love
till we die,
Give you my heart and soul,
my dear,
when you are near,
my heart dies for you,
The promises and love
we made,
never wanted to give up,
Give you my heart and soul
And love you
With all my heart,
Give you my heart

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 12-15-2001).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-12-15 12:03 PM

Vandana, this is beautiful

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-12-15 01:14 PM

(smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Vandana, your words shine with true loves magic! (smiles) May your love forever share with you all his heart and may your heart melt with his as one true love forever! (sigh) Soooooooo lovely, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-12-15 01:23 PM

Oh yes,,, you give your all when you give your love. You have said it with such style and grace. How very beautiful. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-12-15 04:24 PM

what a lovely gem, so beautiful penned!
love it

Charisma

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2001-12-15 11:17 PM

Hi Vandana,

Sounds like love's in the air, it's a wonderful thing to be blessed with true love and I really enjoyed sharing in your thoughts and dreams.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

6 posted 2001-12-15 11:21 PM

Really effective repetition here...what a paint!!!

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

7 posted 2001-12-15 11:22 PM

very nice Vandana, liked your poem.

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

8 posted 2001-12-16 01:59 PM

What a lovely heart. I hope you receive such love back! Your verse pours out in the beauty of your promise.

Sincerely,
Regina

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2001-12-16 02:03 PM

Vandana, your words are so full of love, hope and promise....just wonderful. Enjoyed.
Hugs, Nancy

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-12-16 02:36 PM

There is a lot of strong emotion in this piece Vandana. Nicely written, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

11 posted 2001-12-16 04:58 PM

I truly enjoyed reading this poem. It had such lovely verse.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

12 posted 2001-12-17 05:01 PM

did you find such a love
and a lover worthy of such a gift
if you did
what ever the pain
what ever the risk
you were indeed fortunate
arthur

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

13 posted 2001-12-17 05:03 PM

Vandana-
   What a beautiful and heartfelt write.
   Really enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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