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Song Never Heard
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Song Never Heard |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Song Never Heard I have been a stranger to my own life and more than half not alone but lonely such an emptiness creeps inside of you when you are who you are in name only a screaming heart will not be heard above the pounding of another’s free wings and broken feathers of your own swallows up the songs you could sing there is a hollow type of ringing that actions make lies out of words and no matter what melody lives inside it will forever be a song they never heard "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Seems a sad song, have you tried changing the tune? I like the poetry but I’m not sure I understood all you were putting into it. But the sadest part would be if no one was listening. Bill |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - yours words are very inspiring, and tell of sorrow, but the truth you write. How well I know these words... there is a hollow type of ringing that actions make lies out of words and no matter what melody lives inside it will forever be a song they never heard You are a great and passionate poet... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh Helen, this is sooooo heartwrenching but well-written, dearest friend! (sigh) Some songs may never be heard, but as long as you let your loving heart sing, your heart will be answered always by sweet love and comfort! (kiss on cheek) So sad, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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