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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-12-15 11:37 AM


~~~~~~~
you are there...here with me
whenever I am longing to see
for it only takes so little time
to push the button read a rhyme

when I read your precious rhyme
I do not have awareness of time
distance is not important you see
cause
you are there...here with me
~~~~~~~




A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 12-15-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-15 11:45 AM


Oh yes, how very true it is. BRAVO!!!You have met the challenge wonderfully. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-15 11:56 AM


Titia, this is PERFECT   yes, I agree with you very much....I loose track of time being here with you all too   but I love it!!  
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3 posted 2001-12-15 01:33 PM




(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (sigh) Yes, it always does feel we lose ourselves from reality when we read each other's verse and see dreams and visions come to life before our eyes and ears! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet Titia, your words are always sooooo enchanting! (kiss on cheek) You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-15 02:24 PM




Such a wonderful write.....

I loved it...

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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5 posted 2001-12-15 04:19 PM


So true Titia, beautiful penned  

Charisma

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6 posted 2001-12-16 10:37 AM


Wonderful, Titia....an so true. We are all here with each other despite the actual distances, aren't we? It's a great time to be alive!  


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7 posted 2001-12-16 08:49 PM



Titia, I believe Lady in White will be very, very pleased with this one...

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8 posted 2001-12-16 09:49 PM


Very nicely done, Titia...I was told about this challenge, which just struck me as totally incredible...and this is a great response to it!

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you can change the weather...

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9 posted 2001-12-16 09:57 PM


Titia--This is a lovely thought and a great poem for the challange.  
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10 posted 2001-12-19 04:46 PM



Ah Titia, look what I found.  Another challenge well met!  So many wonderful poets have expounded on this little line, in so many wonderful ways, and you, my dear Lady, take the meaning and encapsulate it for all of us...

Thank you for joining the throng of poets...who write their hearts!

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11 posted 2001-12-19 04:51 PM


Well I loved the fact of you looking here Titia, as we all love you to bit!  And how true, doesn't time fly when you are with friends?

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2001-12-19 04:52 PM


Well it's true my friends
Just a little push
And you are there....here with me

Thanks to you all and Lady in White...thank you so much for the line, it was a beautiful one

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

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