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My Heart On A Bench
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My Heart On A Bench |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
As I sit on this cold, raggedy bench I feel as if my heart's been pinched Of all my love's come and gone I wish there was somewhere that I belonged I've given every love my heart and soul And for these emotions my heart has taken the toll Maybe I share to much emotion Maybe I ask for too much devotion I have so much to share and so much love I hope one day, someone can handle what I dream of For even though my heart has been through so much hell I know of love and want it oh so well Peaches |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
  You have an open heart, ready to be filled. Love will find it, and fill in all the empty spaces. HUGS to you. Keep smiling. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Midnitesun, Thank you so much.  Peaches |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I like the way you use the bench. If you don't have love, let me give you a hug=) Friends and family are always by your side. Lizzy ~A little sour add to taste of life. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Lizzy thanks so much(hugs) Peaches |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Many search for love...sometimes it seems to be hidden in the dark forest...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I could feel the ache in this one...touching write Peaches. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh, I hope someone sits down next to you very, very soon! Kathleen |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A great big heart here. Even on a bench it's still beautiful...patience...someone special will notice your gifts!  Hugs!Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
First off I would like to say thanks to all.I have a love now it is just something that came from the past. James I know exactly what you mean Nancy,glad it touched you Kay thank you.There is someone sitting next to me Regina thanks alot I appreciate it Keep the comments coming on all my poems.I need honesty and am trying to learn different kinds of poetry,just not real great at the writing aspect of it.I am better at the words. Peaches |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The standards of a true heart are very high. But, in time, they will be matched. Hang in there! All writing comes |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Lonewolf:I will and thanks. Peaches |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Peaches, So glad to know that you're not still on the bench. But you haven't forgotten. Ever the dreamer you persevered. Yippee! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Larry C, thanks alot.I appreciate it. Peaches |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
it is good that you dont give up on love..even tho you have been burned by it before... enjoyed the read hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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