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Return of The Twenty or Less...#57
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"TWENTY OR LESS...#57" Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON Through a tear Time veiling a benison of Hope "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark, ok, you made me run to the dictionary with benison  thanks, new word I like this VERY much |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
The return of the twenty or less.... I hurried up reading it once I read that title... I guess I missed those "twenty or less".....  Benison is also new for me....But glad to know it now. But do tears always veil hope??? A powerful write Mark...as always. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very well done, Mark. Time can be a blessing of hope. And now it's time to dust off the shorties, thoughts of more with less. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* blessings of hope are what this season is all about. **big hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Mark, I love it! (big hugggssssss) Through every tear, His heart beacons a signal of hope! (sigh) We all love you so very much, dearest friend, this touched my heart deeply! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mark - most powerful words, with only a few... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mark....as always, very well done! "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...glad I could be of service, SEA. My Melody: Thank you for the missing and impression. Interesting slant regarding "tears"... To be honest, I wrote this one with the word "tear" as in "rip" in mind, but now that you bring up this interpretation, this piece could be even more powerful than originaly intended! Do tears "always" veil hope...? I don't think anything "always" does anything; rather, anything may do something though at times something can do nothing, and anything is something -- which can be nothing, so... (HUH?!?) Kacy: Mmmm -- "dusting off the shorties... "  Thanks for the "thoughts of more with less." Startime: this season and this lifetime... Thanks for the big hugs. Noah: Thanks for the positivity. Bill: ...just some spontaneous thoughts. Thanks for the read & reply. Nancy: thank you for the encouragement. -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi Mark, glad you came back with your shorties... hmm, i too interpreted 'tear' as in 'crying'...and i took the whole poem to mean that sometimes we should let our negative feelings all out by having a really good sob... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Welp...you gave this Country Girl her word for the day. (haha) Loved the write..... Timothysangel *Whatever souls are made of...his and mine are of the same* ~Emily Bronte' |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Faterider: Good day to you. Your interpretation makes for a great catharsis. Pleased you enjoyed.timothysangel1973: There are many more words than there are days out there, but I'm glad one more's become a part of your collection. -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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