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Return of The Twenty or Less...#58 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"TWENTY OR LESS...#58" Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON Another sign: Gulls cease Tides end Shells shattered Stones lying bare but life... "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mark, your 20 or less pieces are always superb and this is no exception. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
But life continues its cycle renew all with the ending of some. You have made me see things very differently with this poem...I love it. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Yes, life can always renew, for in the circle of life everything lives again and brings us all such miracles and treasures to us all! (sigh) BRAVO!!! Your short poems are wonderful, I love it!!! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Mark!! I must put on my thinking cap! Well done...Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mark, I like this. I just watched a movie about a woman from the sea, and it seems perfect to read this now. Sandra |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You mean there is hope in the barren waste land of drifted, sifted, and most washed about remains. I think so too! I am so very glad you came back with this!! Joy to you sweet poet! Sincerely, Regina |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
But Life.. Goes on and on......isn't it? Sometimes I'm not sure if this is a comfort or not... I enjoyed it Mark.....as always... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Goes on. Enjoyed |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you kindly, Kethry.  Thank you, Karen, and yes -- the cycle keeps rotating, though it could use some oil every now and then... Thank you, Noah. Perhaps life isn't a circle but a spiral...? Nancy: Personally, I believe thinking caps should never be removed. Thank you for the hugs. Sandra: "Splash," "The Little Mermaid," or "A Fish Called Wanda"? Joy received most graciously, Regina. I prefer to see the "conclusion" you do, but I leave it open for the reader to decide... I'm encouraged to see that these little "High-Q" poems are so well received. (and rapture to you too, fair poetess...  )My Melody: life may or may not, but the spirit most certainly does; there is comfort in that knowledge... Glad to keep you enjoying... Seymour: ...or so it seems... Thank you. -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
This was very cool, short and sweet and awesome! -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Very nice write Mark... I enjoyed it alot. Timothysangel *Whatever souls are made of...his and mine are of the same* ~Emily Bronte' |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
rebekah33, glad you shared. Thank you. timothysangel1973: thank you for enjoying. -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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