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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-12-15 08:08 AM

Words in Time

In a book, between loosed leaves
Fountain pen inked, lay a leaf
A bit of parchment, and upon first blush
Left me in a state of hush

Amid press of lilac spray
Pretty words wrapped in bouquet
A soft light scent from long past days
Harboring sadness among the gay

Written words for one heart’s swell
Words of promise that once compelled
One’s heart to heart, a pledge long kept
Words so pure, I quietly wept

~*~*~*~*~*~

Render me unto thy heart of sighs
Tend to me, but speak me no lies
Come with vision of night’s bequest
To seek but one that loves you best

Serenade me one more time
With this your heart which now is mine
Intrude into my innermost thought
With this, your love, for which I’ve sought

Tighten your hold, grasp for dear reason
This love that shall enhance all seasons
This love to linger ‘neath fingertips
This love that’s sweet upon your lips

This love that crosses timeless air
And stays as your “forever”…there…

~*~*~*~*~*~

And a date thereon inscribed
Written back in ’eighty-five
Was it man’s hand, or woman’s script
The parchment trembled in my grip

The last lines gave me pause to stare
From one to another, this undying care

This love that crosses timeless air
And stays as your “forever”…there…

                                                                                               ©Karilea Rilling Jungel
                                                                                               14 December 2000
                                                                                               revised 15 December 2001

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-12-15 08:15 AM

Sunshine,
A beautiful write good flow and rhyme, read ir and had a good time. *L*

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

2 posted 2001-12-15 09:38 AM

Sunshine,this was so beautful that I almost cried.

All I could think about was about a couple from the 1800`s.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

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lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-12-15 10:08 AM

how beautiful penned.....this is a keeper for sure Karilea

Charisma

~*Theresia~*

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

4 posted 2001-12-15 12:19 PM

I do think I remember this??? One like it maybe??? It sure feels familiar

"Serenade me one more time
With this your heart which now is mine
Intrude into my innermost thought
With this, your love, for which I’ve sought"

beautiful!!!

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
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5 posted 2001-12-15 12:27 PM

Wonderfully romantic!!

Makes me think of my favorite Christoper Reeve movie...Somewhere in Time

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-12-15 01:42 PM

*sigh* I love it.....somehow it was like love was transported through time to the present. The ink of your pen giving it birth from the past. Absolutely magical. **hug**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-12-15 01:46 PM

(smiles) CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Such timeless chivalry and pure legacy of love is passed through the parchment of your loving quill in this enchanting romantic poem! (smiles) The beauty of love always shines from your golden heart, sweet friend I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eatom

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

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British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-12-15 02:51 PM

Oh my goodness!

Shadowed_Innersense
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since 2001-12-05

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somewhere at the edge

9 posted 2001-12-15 02:57 PM

A splendid write.
Shows eternal love
and its reach from any age.
A true masterpiece withstanding all time.

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-12-15 10:48 PM

This is wonderful, I do believe that love is eternal.
Sandra

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Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-12-15 10:56 PM

A love that lasts through all eternity.
Beautiful write Karilea...I really enjoyed this.
And, like VAS, it reminded me of my favourite movie Somewhere In Time also.
Good write! ~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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