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rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

0 posted 2001-12-13 04:33 AM

He is close.
Close enough for me to
feel his breath on my neck.
My body tingles.
I want to look into his eyes.
But I'm too afaid,
of what I'll find there
and of what I won't
So, i just hold my breath.
And wait.
As I have waited for so long,
for the words I've been hoping and dreaming of.
The silence is broken,
when he clears his throat.
A small cough.
But big enough for me to turn and look at him.
And it happens.
Our eyes lock,
and for once I don't avert them.
I only look deeper into his,
searching.
I wish I can tell him,
how much i want him to
hold me, love me,
need me.
And how I've loved him for so long.
This moment lasts forever.
Erin, he says,
quietly, but strong,
slightly questioning.
I crinkle my forehead,
unsure of what to say.

His hand reaches out,
and he runs a finger down my cheek.
I breathe in,
slow and deep
and close my eyes.
His finger pauses on my chin,
and gently,
oh so gently,
lifts it up.
I open my eyes and smile,
and bite my lip out of nervousness.
Erin...he starts again,
then let's his lips finish the thought,
soft but passionate,
everything I had imagined

JoMason
Member

since 2001-12-07

Posts 57

1 posted 2001-12-13 05:01 AM

Rebekah33,

Welcome to Passions. If you really love to write and read poetry, you'll truly enjoy it here.

Very nice work for your first post.
I can tell you dig this guy the most!

JoMason
12/13/01

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2001-12-13 06:27 AM

Very nicely done, Erin - Welcome to Passions - You and your lovely poetry will find a comfortable home here... Check your email for a special greeting..

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-13 08:42 AM

WOW!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! (sigh) Oh Rebekah, this is sooooooooo romantic, your beautiful heart sings with the joy of love in this gorgeous expression of romance! (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I'm so happy that you have found true love, may true love forever blossom in your heart! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Rebekah, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-12-13 08:48 AM

Welcome to Passions! A beautiful first poem, and I'm looking forward to more!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-12-13 08:56 AM

awwwww, this is wonderful!

made big smiles

Welcome!!

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-12-13 09:09 AM

What a wonderful first post Rebekah, Welcome to Passions! Lovely expression in this piece, I hope to read more!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-12-13 09:16 AM

Rebekah,
Welcome and a lovely write.

Joe Lamando
Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 124
Massachusetts,USA

8 posted 2001-12-13 09:44 AM

Rebekah,
Welcome to PIP
Your poem was sensitive and passionate
Hope to see more soon

Joe Lamando

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

9 posted 2001-12-13 09:48 AM

Welcome aboard with a beautiful post!

Rogue24
Member

since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-12-13 09:54 AM

Very sweet entrance! Daydreams for lovers, *looks out the window* , such a passionate way to spend a rainy day.

Welcome! I hope to see more of your write!
Hugs.
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

11 posted 2001-12-13 10:24 AM

Welcome to passions and you made a beautiful entrance.....well done

Charisma

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

12 posted 2001-12-13 11:18 AM

This is a very tender passionate poem, and a great beginning for you at Passions. Your heart's work will be well received and enjoyed by many sensitive people. Welcome, and enjoy your every moment here. You will never regret the day you joined this group.

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

13 posted 2001-12-13 11:23 AM

Passionately written from your heart. Well done.

O
"Got Opeth?"

rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

14 posted 2001-12-13 01:20 PM

Thanks everyone! I'm soooo happy to be here, you'll never know. But alas, I must go study for finals :P

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2001-12-13 06:05 PM

Rebekah~
I want to add my WELCOME to PASSIONS~
Lovely, touching thoughts ... you'll enjoy it here~

Good luck on those finals ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

16 posted 2001-12-13 06:20 PM

rebekah
Such a stunning and sensual piece of writing you have afforded us. The imagery was purely breathtaking and was much enjoyed by this reader. Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

17 posted 2001-12-13 06:43 PM

Wonderful and sensual first post!
I shall be looking forward to more of yours.
Make yourself at home!
~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-12-13 09:14 PM

Rebekah...this is a very visual and moving
poem...I could sense the feelings of both
lovers...and I smiled when I knew it had
become perfect for both...

Welcome to Passions...a very warm poetic
place to grow and enjoy fine poetry.

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

19 posted 2001-12-13 10:09 PM

Great first post! It seems as if the love is flowing, a good felling. I look forward to reading more posts from you! Welcome, I hope you enjoy!

Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

20 posted 2001-12-14 12:25 PM

rebekah,oh what a lovely and romantic poem

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

21 posted 2001-12-14 12:43 PM

Your words have an excellent touch.
Welcome, I feel you will be PASSION-ately
enjoyed. *s

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

22 posted 2001-12-15 10:52 PM

Hi Rebekah,

What a awesome first post, you had me hanging to the very end and that's wonderful, welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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