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A Star
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A Star |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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A Star A Star shining so brightly on the new baby who had come that night to bless the people of the earth A precious son whose message would be sung to all nations around the world down through history A man who would teach the true meaning of love one another that was forgotten A son who suffered and understands pain that’s afflicted man from the beginning of time A King whose kingdom, most treasured and desired above any others for it’s wealth is not of precious metals Your Mighty King Your Redeemer Your Saviour Your God To teach of love man may feel joy am I Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! BRAVO!!! HIS LOVE SHINES IN YOUR GORGEOUS POEM THAT SHINES LIKE THE STAR HIS HEART IS!!! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! Tears fell down my face reading this, sweet friend, God Bless You! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet Karen! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...He would be very proud of you... NO...He IS very proud of you... You have done this very well...I am very privileged to know a lady that can do such art.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen! This is wonderful! Oh how I wish I knew how...I just love it!! And...such beautiful words to go with the star. BRAVO!! ~Hugs, Nancy~  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen, Oh my!!!!! This is simply amazing chickie. Wow. It's beautiful.. both in presentation and in meaning. Incredable. Wow. Can ya tell I loved it? Hugs to you,  Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful and creative, Karen. And positive thoughts for us all. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Noah...Thank you, dear one. You always put such a smile on my face. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Magnus...I am so glad you like it...The feeling is mutual, my friend. I am proud to call you friend for your words light the pages here with true love that touches all our hearts. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Nancy....thank you, dear one. I love to build these...someday I want to be really good at them...**big hugs** Tara...You are such a dear...I can feel your smile through your words. Thank you, so much. **hugs** Sandra...thank you so much...my wish for you is that love will light your life for Christmas....**you never can tell what magic can happen this time of year** **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Simply beautiful and thank you for posting ...enjoyed very much..hugsss ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Victoria...thank you, so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. **big hugs** back to you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
very well "Put" arthur still waiting |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
STUNNING!!! love it......both your poem and the presentation. Excellent done Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
What a great job of writing about Christ. It was remarkable how you fit it into a star. Boy! Are you talented. Thanks for such a great poem. God has blessed you. Roger |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Very illuminating, both in presentation and verse! *s |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Very illuminating, both in presentation and verse! *s |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Very illuminating, both in presentation and verse! *s |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
So sorry for the multiple posts. My screen went crazy as I was posting and when I tried to go back to edit it wouldn't allow me to. Sorry! |
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