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Open Poetry #17
{{{ You are there, here with me}}} (an attempt at the Lady's challange)
MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106 across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
0posted2001-12-1503:12 PM
~*~ You are there, here with me ~*~
You are there Yet here with me And that’s the beguiling mystery How could you be there There Beyond The seen horizons Beyond the echoing lines The hushed breeze The tumbling leaves Within me
Yet… Not beyond my own horizons Not beyond the echoing music Of my words Not beyond the reach Of my soul You are there There beyond the echoes of me Beyond my reach Beyond my words of speech Beyond my every breath
Yet You are here Within my vein Within my arteries And feelings so supreme
And as I have you Close Near Yet so far So far that my breath Doesn’t have you My eyes Can not see you And my fingers Do not brush away The dust of feelings That you keep away And words you can’t say
Yes… You are far That it fills me with fear To have you yet so near
A magnificent poem for the challlenge with music and graphics that suit it perfectly. I love it. **hugs**
Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
Mistletoe Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816 Portland, Oregon
2posted2001-12-1503:20 PM
BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh sweet friend, this is soooooooo beautiful! (smiles) May the love of your heart come to you and forever be there with you in spirit and in heart! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooooo breathtakingly beautiful! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!
May love and light always shine upon you!
Love, Noah Eaton
Charisma
Member Ascendant
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906 lost in blue pages
3posted2001-12-1503:56 PM
love the poem and also the presentation
Excellent work
Charisma
~*Theresia~*
MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015 In a corporeal internship...
4posted2001-12-1504:47 PM
...as far as a boomerang; as near as a bungee cord: distance measured in unspoken implications... This is a very beautiful write saturated with feeling. I like this one very much, My Melody.
-MVS
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catalinamoon
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543 The Shores of Alone
5posted2001-12-1506:55 PM
Melody You sing these words like a beautiful melody..like you. Sandra
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182 Netherlands
6posted2001-12-1507:19 PM
really enjoyed your beautiful words
Titia
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113 Canada eh.
7posted2001-12-1507:25 PM
FANTASTIC!! Wonderful work here Melody! Enjoyed the presentation as well. ~Hugs, Nancy~
"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."
MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106 across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
8posted2001-12-1509:12 PM
~Startime~
I'm very glad that you loved it dearest...
Thank you for your kind words..they are greatly appreciated.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Noah~
Sweet gentle friend .......
Here I bow for your clapping and it thrills me to know that you loved it so.... And I love you all my friend....
I've written this piece for the challange and that's all....
Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Charisma~
Thank you soooo much dear
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mark~
As far as a shining star As near as all that you are
As far as the wind blowing on some far away land as near as the breath and the tear in my hand....
.... ....
It thrills me deeply that you like this one....
Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Sandra~
Thank you sooooooo much sweet lady.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Titia~
I'm very glad you enjoyed it...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Nancy~ I appreciate your lovely comment...