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Six Seamen
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Six Seamen |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Six Seamen Sad Sally simmers sumptuously Slow, still steamy Sets sights seripticiously Singly shy, so sly Staring straight, sipping. Several slightly stiff sailors Sallied stumbling six-sensedly sensing Sexual semi-tones swirling. Six sat salubriously sipping “Salute”ing, “skol”ing, skyward. Soon, stiff Sam stood, strode, staggered Stumbled, skidded scraping Sally’s shoe. Shucks, sorry said Sam. Scram shouted Sally, Suddenly sanctimonious. Six sailors staggered shipward Sam-scoffing, stumble-spoofing. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Seems sertainly settling seeing such spectacular story-telling! I've experimented with this concept before.. having every word start with the same letter, at times a different letter in each stanza, ultimately forming one word that sums it all up, but how ever you do it, hey man whatever floats your boat. This was a nice read |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
LOL.....what a tongue twister... Beautifully done!      copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Glenn Logan Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 111Virginia |
Interesting! And thus the letter "S" is done! You might get a kick out of seeing what I did with "L" in a posting a week or so ago called "On Loving Luv Ann to the Lonely End of Loving." Best wishes, Glenn Logan |
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