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Chatahoochie Territory
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Chatahoochie Territory |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Chatahoochie Territory Chatahoochie territory where airboat trails wind like vines through the everglades and Indians summoning tourists to a taste of primativism bind themselves to antiquity like milestones on the trail of time. Thus do they order the future with more of the past with only the hope of failing memory to bring new experience. Strange how creativity manipulates the past through the present and into the future. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like the way you brought everything together in time. I remember visiting Chattahootchie years ago. Thanks for the visit. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
The nostalgia in your mind is made clear in your words. Opeth |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! (sigh) I've never been to Chatahoochie but I dream of going there and visiting all the beautiful memories you weave in your wonderful words! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is marvelous and nostalgicly beautiful! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joe, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Joe: Interesting, how someplaces can stand inbetween then and now...and take you back for a time..then leave you with now. Enjoyed lines below especially in this very interesting poem: "bind themselves to antiquity like milestones on the trail of time." |
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Glenn Logan Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 111Virginia |
Once again, an intersting poem! Glenn Logan |
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