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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-12-06 09:25 PM


Winter snow fell that day
Had to drive about 40 miles
In the slippery ice and snow
Seeing cars slide off the road
Praying that I would get home
Early enough to feed my llama
Remember how she loves apples
So I stopped to buy some more

Often feeding her twice a day
For her to become more at ease

Don't know if she will ever come
Around to let me touch her neck
Wish she would let me, cause
Now she is mine for keeps

By Sue 12-6-01

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (edited 12-06-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-06 09:35 PM




(smiles) BRAVO!!! WONDERFUL CHALLENGE!!! I'm so happy you got back safely and got to feed your sweet llama your apples! (smiles) Your llama must be sooooooooo adorable! (sigh) BRAVO!!! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-11 11:40 AM


SmartChick~
Delightful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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N orth Carolina Girl
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3 posted 2001-12-14 12:39 PM


SmartChick,I kind of like the idea of a pet llama.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

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