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You are There, Here with me Lady's challange
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You are There, Here with me Lady's challange |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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You are There, Here with me Once upon a time is ever Minutes unticking dawning stayed In my vision all the oceans Wading footsteps start cascade. Across a prairie torched in sundown Drinking lips of rivers free Peaceful following of a heartbeat You are there, here with me In the mirror of reflection Scruff kneed climbing up a tree Popping bubbles of reminder You are there, here with me Could my inkwell touch creation Pierce the truth of always love You would be the one with answer Gleaned from sky climbed search above So I wait here in the stillness Opening all my depth of be With joy to find what I was knowing You are there, here with me. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 12-13-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
* reading thru tears and awe ... shaking my head and lacking the words to tell you just how awesome this is........... rest assured....I'll be back..... *s* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Once upon a time is ever Minutes unticking dawning stayed ===================================== Across a prairie torched in sundown Drinking lips of rivers free ====================================== Popping bubbles of reminder You are there, here with me Could my inkwell touch creation Pierce the truth of always love You would always know the answer Of this sky climbed search above ======================================= Opening all my depth of be With joy to find what I was knowing You are there, here with me. ======================================== From that poetically perfect opening line... to the end of this angel inspired verse... you had me smiling at your gift and holding my breath. ONLY YOU would come up with this image Across a prairie torched in sundown Drinking lips of rivers free and this.... Could my inkwell touch creation Pierce the truth of always love YES!!!!!!!!! you just did with this. Remind me to send Lady a thank you note for this challenge....  exquisite write Martie  (IWIHWT) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm just gonna nod my head and point to Janet...."what she said"  this is soooo wow!!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sitting here speechless, pointing to JM's reply and muttering "ditto". Martie...this is exquisite, remarkable,...sorry, I just can't find the words strong enough to describe what you have done to me with this write!! You have met this challenge with incredible insight and sense of wonder! ~BIG hugs to you sweet friend, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Make that three "dittos" oh my gosh Martie! ~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
A very beautiful challenge met! Your words run deep inside my soul, An imprint of the imagery, I am awestruck of your final goal, As your words are there, here with me. HUGS Just beautiful!  Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
...(hushed silence) regards, sudhir P.S. you are the POET |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nodding my head at SEA who's pointing at Janet Marie, what they said... This is absolutely awesome, and I know Lady is going to put this in a very, very special place.... like me! Martie...remind me never to post a challenge, because you just take and whomp behinds when you pick up your pen... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, I can't outdo JM's writing art. But you have a place in my heart. *L* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Indeed... This is lovely, as usual, dear Martie.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh wow! This is just beautiful, Martie. Sounds like you met this challenge well. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*library* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Martie. I wish you could hear the sigh. A sigh of content, of knowing that when one reads your writings, they feel emotion that only real poets can elicit from the reader. This is a marvelous addition to the treasure that is growing from the words, You are there, here with me. A Keeper. Always. Thank you. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my gosh...this beautiful poem sings...It is a melody of perfection. I read it three times and am left in awe of how perfect a poem it is. Thank you for writing it for the challenge. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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