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Sentimental Shakedown - Marge's Challenge...
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Sentimental Shakedown - Marge's Challenge... |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
 ..  ..Pardon me for the length...but had to say it.... Sentimental Shakedown 'Welcome to my world'…. 'The Memory Garden', Where, I share the 'Gifts from the heart'… A 'Buffet of beauty'…, a 'Bucket of joy'.. A 'Box full of poems'….,from a 'Poetic Palette'… All 'Reflections'…'Ink from another's pen'…. From the 'Pages of the past'… This is just a 'Flashback'… 'Totally archeological'… Just tracing 'The poet's path'…. 'Once upon a time'… I asked my 'Angel on tippy-toes'… 'Mom, what will I be?'… 'How much further must I go?'… 'Just how lucky can I get?'… 'When?,,,tell me when..' For, 'Seeker I am'… With the 'Spirits of the quest'… 'Chasing shadows'… To get to know the 'Boomerangs of life'… Said she, 'My Darling Daughter'… 'My Precious Child'… 'As long as there's a mountain'… 'You always have a choice'… 'Start where you are'… Open a 'Window to your world'… 'Shhh!…', 'Don't blink..' 'Tomorrow smiles for thee'… Always 'He's making rounds', 'Building bridges…reaching out', 'Going the Extra Mile…' 'Changing….rearranging' Giving us a 'Harvest of angels'… 'A Rare Bouquet'…, 'Soft and tender'… My mind is but a 'Blank wallpaper'… 'I'm but the Sculptor's clay'… But ' Wisdom of a child' knew I was ready for a 'New Rendezvous'.. To hear the 'Angel Chorus'… To hear 'Life's Songs'… To receive 'The Greatest Gift'!!! 'Sun sets…to rise again'… 'An ocean of emotion…set adrift'… I wait in 'Deep Surrender'… 'Counting my blessings'… 'I want to feel'…'Freedom's hues'... For I know now… 'Freedom is not free'… I send out my plea 'Straight to God's ears'…. I hear the 'Whispering winds'… I watch the 'Cotton Candy Clouds'… Ah!….Here stands 'A moment in time'… 'While God stood watch'… 'He speaks and I listen'… 'He built a bridge'… 'He anchors me'…'I am in his hands'… 'Painting Life with my words'…. 'Weaving our friendship'… Creating a 'Circle of Friendship'….. 'A Sacred Circle'…. Now, 'It goes without saying'… We are 'Beary Beary Good Friends'… Singing to each other…. 'You Are My Night'… 'You Are My Morning'…. 'Love me like there's no tomorrow'… 'Forever And Ever And Ever'… Thank you 'Poets A to Z' For without you, I would have simply gone to z z z z z!!!!! (Thank you, Dear Marge...for the 'direct' inspiration...) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bravo! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is fantastic, amigo!!! You've obviously been prowling through the archives, pondering the blessings that flow from this lady's pen... and you've created a beauty all your own! Wonderful work! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ You've certainly chosen a fitting member ID - for friend is just what you are~ To me this is such an honor ... and I thank you so very much. My goodness ... you've included titles from 73 of my archived pieces to produce this work~ You've been a very busy friend~ *Hugs* to you ... WOW ! Just WOW ! I never expected this inspiring phrase to take this lovely turn~ Appreciating it more than you could know~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is really such an amazingly wonderful work... Great  regards, sudhir |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I don't care how long it was I wanted it to just keep going. This is such a wonderful read. You touched me so much. I love it. I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Sunshine - thanks for stopping by and taking time to read Suthern - thank you my friend,..you said it right...pondering the blessings...that's just what i did...happy that you liked it.. Marge - thank you dear...i'm so glad that you enjoyed it....i cannot tell you just how the titles alone spoke to me...(at a loss of words to express about the contents)...you're truly an inspiration...love & hugs Sudhir - thank you for your words...i appreciate it Startime - i felt happy that you didn't mind the length and you liked it...thank you love & hugs to all, amigo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
amigo- Wow! What an incredible write! You really did your homework for this one; and, as far as I'm concerned, you get an A+!  This is AWESOME! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 EXCELLENT!!! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Vicky - thank you...for your sweet comments...and ofcourse, for your A+...thank you dear...  Nancy - thank you...i am so happy to see all your comments...  luv & hugs, amigo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO!!! Congratulations!!!  I am sorry I missed this one the first go around. It is awesome! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
amigo..this is amazing..so glad I didn't miss it! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very sweet......and wonderful little treasure!!!! LOVE IT!!! HUGS Amigo!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Thank you dear ones for your sweet words....sorry, I am in a rush...I have to run.... see you soon...  luv & hugs, amigo [This message has been edited by amigo (edited 12-14-2001).] |
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