Open Poetry #17 |
You Are There , Here With Me (Lady W Challenge ) |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You Are There, Here With Me You are there, here with me Walking hand in hand Alongside the sea Footsteps in the sand You are there, here with me Opening up hearts gate To flow endlessly Secret desires we sate You are there, here with me On every star that shone Flying on melodies Love light leads me on You are there, here with me Sensuous loving kind Every dream created Are forever on my mind You are there, here with me Earth, wind and fire For now until eternity You are my hearts desire Hope © 2001 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Hope, your lovely words reflect the challenge so heavenly! (sigh) Sweet love will forever sing in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is beautiful, I like the flow and rhyme, very nice |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hope, this is a lovely response to Lady's challenge. I'll bet she'll enjoy this when she gets back! Good for you! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What is most wonderful about a little challenge is that we get to see so many styles of poetry come through. This is charming, and I am so glad you joined in! Thank you1 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* stunning. You did a magnificent job with the challenge, Hope. Romance flows from every word. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Noah , hugs reaching over to you , kiss and a huge thank you !!! Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Sea for your sweet comment much appreciated Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sunshine , I'm so pleased you enjoyed, thanks for your reply Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Lady W, I am so pleased you enjoyed , I enjoyed the challenge , it brings all our thoughts together Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Karen for your sweet kind reply , yes I agree when romance grows the heart truly flows Hope |
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