Open Poetry #17 |
'Lady In White's Challenge: You are there... |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
across many deep valleys and beyond the seven seas faraway, where far can be there you are, where eyes can't see I had missed you such a lot, so much that I often thought, that our friendship had been shot in some strange war, never fought this went on till truth glisten'd like one bright ray from the sun that you are the special one in my heart's web, so well-spun when I curve into some bends feeling drained with sun's descend there you are always, my friend, still smiling at day's fag end faraway, where eyes can't see yet you are there, here with Me in my heart, where eyes don't see gifting hugs and smiles for free |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sudhir lyer~ this is absolutely stunning! I love it! Challenge exceeded!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Common symptons of love. Sometimes a candy bar will help. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sudhir, Lady in White will be so delightfully pleased with this one, I know! You did an exceptional piece of work with this challenge...we ought to challenge you more, just to make sure you stick around Passions! It is SO good to have you home! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Love will always be shining in our hearts, just as the love and compassion you share with us all always whsipers through your lovely words! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet Sudhir, we all love you so very much! (big hugggggsssss) You are always here with me in my heart and spirit, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Amazing write! BRAVO! I am awestruck at the talents within the forum! Never ceases to amaze me. Cheers! Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all so much... Really, when I came here this morning... I did not have anything to write about, and no intention to write at all... then I read Lady's poem and then the challenge cast its spell on me... and this was the result... all magic... Thank you so much Lady for this wonderful moment of inspire... and am I glad that all of you enjoyed what you saw... regards, sudhir |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Sudhir....this is written very well...an expression conveyed well...thank you |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how wonderfully beautiful is this poem. I felt the reaching out in every word. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
An excellent way with words is most definitely portrayed in this writing. Opeth |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
We love it when you are here with us, while you are also there. These challenges are so much fun, and can really trigger the mind to shoot for the stars. Your mind is always cosmic. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done my friend. . . a superb use of the language and the thoughts behind the words. . . I enjoyed it very much. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ah Sudhir, how could not you write of something so obviously close to your heart... Challenge well met, in the here of there... quote: |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Just so very beautiful Sudhir Very touchy, reached my heart Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sudhir, Very well done and a challenge well met. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you all very very much... Regards, sudhir |
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