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Rogue24
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since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2001-12-13 10:53 AM

You are There Here With Me

You are there here with me
Your soft voice like a melody
My mind filled
With tranquility
You are here inside of me

You are there here with me
My heart yours for eternity
I sing you this, my loves plea
A song embraced delicately
You are here a part of me

You are there here with me
Our souls linked internally
A connection lifting our spirits free
What we are, what we will be
A love forever here with me.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-12-13 10:59 AM

A beautiful response to a delightful challenge...you've met this quite well, and should grin with some pride...it's a Keeper!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-12-13 11:25 AM

This is charming and lovely...
I really enjoyed the play on the challenge phrase...you turned it into several poetic phrases and created a romantic soft melody of rhyme and verse.
Very cool, all these perfect challenge responses with this pretty phrase makes me want to write one...where is my mooody muse

Well done Poet Rogue!!
jm

Its not like you to say sorry,
I was waitin on a different story.
This time I'm mistaken ...
for handing you a heart worth breaking.

Nickleback

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-12-13 11:27 AM

yes, Like Janet, I liked the way you played on the challenge phrase

this is really great

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-13 11:38 AM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet T.W! (sigh) Your love shines in all these beautiful words! May true love forever blossom in your loving heart! (smiles) I love it!!! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet T.W, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Rogue24
Member

since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2001-12-13 11:50 AM

Sunshine:

thank you

I hope I did Lady some justice

JM: Muse, what a love hate relationship eh? one minute its your best mate, the next all you get is attitude

I am glad you enjoyed my write. Thank you for your kind words.

Sea:

This was a very fun challenge, I enjoyed playing with the words!

Noah: As always your kind words warm my heart, I am so glad my work is enjoyed!

Hugs!
Ter

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

N orth Carolina Girl
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

6 posted 2001-12-13 12:22 PM

Rogue,this was wonderful!I must say you handled the challenge perfectly.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

7 posted 2001-12-13 12:23 PM

this is fantastic....

regards,
sudhir

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2001-12-13 12:28 PM

Terry,

Ohhh this is really wonderful

My first response was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

Well done.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-12-13 01:09 PM

*sigh* so very romantic...this is just the kind of poem to put me in a wonderful mood for work....so much feeling in your words. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Rogue24
Member

since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-12-13 01:40 PM

NC Girl: Thank you so much

I had fun writing it!

Sudhir: GLad you enjoyed it

Tara: Hugs sweetie

I am a sap you know it

Startime: I am glad I was able to help make your day warm! Hope you have a great finish to your day!

Hugs all!
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

11 posted 2001-12-13 05:45 PM

Rogue, this poem only proves you are unworthy of your name, for a sweet poet penned this, and not a rogue...no, not at all. Well done, Sir!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-12-13 07:07 PM

I must agree...no rogue could write this so
well...

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

13 posted 2001-12-13 07:37 PM

Just wonderful

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

14 posted 2001-12-13 07:55 PM

Fantastic! Challenge well met! ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Rogue24
Member

since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

15 posted 2001-12-14 02:49 AM

Lady In White:

thank you for your words of praise, and thank you my inspiration, without your sweet words and lovely challenge these words would have never graced my heart. My gratitude is yours My Lady.

Magnus:

Thank you for your kind words, cheers!

Titia:

thank you

Nancy:

Thank you for reading! I thoroughly enjoyed this challenge and look forward to more!
HUGS
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

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