Open Poetry #17 |
Just because... |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
just because -- I love sunsets and you love sunrises doesn't mean we are not compatible after all, you are not a PC and I am not a Macintosh! just because -- I write and you read doesn’t mean that I am a writer or your English is good after all, what you read is what I write and that doesn't make you bright just because -- I wrote this, doesn't mean that you should read but, if you did why you never responded is what feels strange to me! didn't this make you laugh? or was this just plain stupid? --------- I wrote this just to make someone who was feeling depressed, laugh... and send this by an e-mail... twice... I added the last bit in the second e-mail, because my friend did not respond... the reason of not responding that my friend gave was "because I couldn't stop laughing at your stupidity and creative craziness" regards to all, sudhir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Highly creative snippets of one's life...shared in poetry...how well you do these, how clever to share... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ You're WONDERFUL~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I think it's a wonderful poem and if it made someone smile, it's the best! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: aren't they great??? well done my friend. . . just goes to show you again, the power of words. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, It is a good poem, enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nothing beats creative laziness for producing a smile and a laugh. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Your creative laziness made someone smile, and produced a wonderful poem! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo wonderful, sweet friend! (smiles) We are not always compatible, but our love is always there, and together we are all intertwined in loves spirit! (sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love your wonderful words! (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Very cute! And now you have spread the smiles beyond one - after all, you are not a PC and I am not a Macintosh! I love this hehehe ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
many thanks and regards to all, sudhir |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed this very much... I love the I'm not/you're not comparisons... thanks for the grins! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very creative. I'm glad you were able to make your friend laugh. Sandra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
very creative indeed....enjoyed your words Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sudhir, You brought a smile to my lips Thansk for sharing this Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is cute indeed. I can well imagine this bringing a great big smile to a friend who was down. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sudhir....I don't believe there is a single part of this poem that is stupid...Did it not accomplish your goal? That makes it priceless... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all very much, my wonderful friends... Regards, sudhir |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
All poetry should make people smile |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
ahhh stupidity and craziness, two great friends of mine Your friend is lucky, its good to have friends when a miserable day strikes! Cheers! Ter Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you very much, my friends... much appreciated... regards, sudhir |
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