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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2001-12-11 12:17 PM


just because --

I love sunsets and
you love sunrises
doesn't mean
we are not
compatible

after all,
you are not a PC and
I am not a Macintosh!

just because --

I write and
you read
doesn’t mean
that I am a writer
or your English is good

after all,
what you read is what I write
and that doesn't make you bright


just because --

I wrote this,
doesn't mean that
you should read

but, if you did
why you never
responded is
what feels strange to me!

didn't this make you laugh?
or was this just plain stupid?

---------
I wrote this just to make someone who was feeling depressed, laugh... and send this by an e-mail... twice... I added the last bit in the second e-mail, because my friend did not respond... the reason of not responding that my friend gave was "because I couldn't stop laughing at your stupidity and creative craziness"



regards to all,
sudhir

© Copyright 2001 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-12-11 12:34 PM



Highly creative snippets of one's life...shared in poetry...how well you do these, how clever to share...

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2 posted 2001-12-11 12:37 PM


Sudhir~
You're WONDERFUL~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2001-12-11 01:35 PM


I think it's a wonderful poem and if it made someone smile, it's the best!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
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4 posted 2001-12-11 02:40 PM


quote:
your stupidity and creative craziness

aren't they great???  

well done my friend. . . just goes to show you again, the power of words. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-12-11 02:48 PM


Sudhir,
It is a good poem, enjoyed.

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6 posted 2001-12-11 03:06 PM


Nothing beats creative laziness for producing a smile and a laugh.  
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7 posted 2001-12-11 04:42 PM


Your creative laziness made someone smile, and produced a wonderful poem!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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8 posted 2001-12-11 05:01 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo wonderful, sweet friend! (smiles) We are not always compatible, but our love is always there, and together we are all intertwined in loves spirit! (sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love your wonderful words! (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2001-12-11 05:16 PM


Very cute!  And now you have spread the smiles beyond one -

after all,
you are not a PC and
I am not a Macintosh!

I love this hehehe  

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 2001-12-12 07:10 AM




many thanks and
regards to all,
sudhir

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11 posted 2001-12-12 12:27 PM


I enjoyed this very much... I love the I'm not/you're not comparisons... thanks for the grins!
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12 posted 2001-12-12 06:11 PM


Very creative. I'm glad you were able to make your friend laugh.
Sandra

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13 posted 2001-12-12 06:14 PM


very creative indeed....enjoyed your words  

Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

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14 posted 2001-12-12 06:25 PM


Sudhir,

     You brought a smile to my lips Thansk for sharing this  

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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15 posted 2001-12-12 09:38 PM


This is cute indeed. I can well imagine this bringing a great big smile to a friend who was down.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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16 posted 2001-12-12 09:58 PM


Sudhir....I don't believe there is a single
part of this poem that is stupid...Did it not
accomplish your goal?   That makes it
priceless...

Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 2001-12-13 08:16 AM


Thank you all very much, my wonderful friends...

Regards,
sudhir

rebekah33
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18 posted 2001-12-13 12:52 PM


All poetry should make people smile  
Rogue24
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19 posted 2001-12-13 12:58 PM


ahhh stupidity and craziness, two great friends of mine    
Your friend is lucky, its good to have friends when a miserable day strikes!
Cheers!
Ter

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Sudhir Iyer
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20 posted 2001-12-14 05:43 AM


thank you very much, my friends... much appreciated...

regards,
sudhir

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