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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Find the ancient lamp rub it then, with love and care tell the genie all *** Sit beneath the moon Connect with her glow tonight make your wish be known *** Hold your loved one close your truest dream will be found open full your heart *** Feel ocean power draw magic signs in the sand prepare to receive *** Wish with all your heart Gaze heavenward every night catch a falling star *** Stroll down country lane look deeply into the well toss your pennies in *** Sun falls in ocean brilliant glow surrounds the world make your wish tonight *** Believe in Santa make a list and check it twice then be very good |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
You give us such wonderful wishful thoughts, I hope yours comes true. Bill |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, You have a whole sox full of lovely write. Happy holiday. *L* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sandra, I love these so so much! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy I can inspire you to write such breathtakingly beautiful visions like these. (smiles) You've inspired me to write more. (sigh) I saw the sun fall upon a lovers beach, your crystal wishing well, Santa Claus, all your lovely wishes! I love them all, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Feel ocean power draw magic signs in the sand prepare to receive" all were wonderful, but I like this one best  |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I like these -- they connect nicely to the theme and with each other much like a strand of jewels. -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
how lovely these are.... Regards, sudhir |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
catalinamoon, OOOOOoOoOooooo these are just wonderful  and veryy much enjoyed Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
To me it is as if everybody's dream has become a reality - that is what your words spoke to me. Opeth |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Sit beneath the moon Connect with her glow tonight make your wish be known I am very much a moonchild, I recall times when sitting at my window sill looking up to her mesmerizing glow I would feel alright with the world, knowing she would always come to me at nite. Beautiful words, thank you for the memories. HUGS  Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've got my lamp Sandra. . . where's the Moon???  wonderfully done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Never thought about how many ways there were to make wishes. Magically comforting images...all. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You use this style to it's fullest, Sandra....a wonderful portrayal... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, these are so beautiful and you have connected the theme to each one so well. I especially like the last one about believing in Santa....cuz I do! Hugs sweetie! "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Catalinamoon, Even I, who know nothing of form and style could feel the unity in this piece. Very lovely. JoMason 12/13/01 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have a problem with that Santa one...sometimes I'm naughty...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done Sandra...you are on a roll ha.. hugs ~Victoria~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very very nice. I hope all your wishes come true! Keep reaching for the stars |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
when you make a wish close your eyes and squeeze real tight and it will come true Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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