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The Vision |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Vision She visits me on misty nights When moonlight shines in ghostly lights And shadows dance a tango’s flair Like buttercups that twist the air A fantasy of phantoms soar With veils of clouds in silver awe And music plays the leaves of trees A sound of wonder in the breeze It warms me like aperitif To temperatures of disbelief And lifts me like a snow white dove Into the stream of flowing love It’s there I swear in savoir-faire In daylight I would never dare. But in my dream I reign supreme I make her mine, my loving queen. And though it is a dreamers view It is the dream I wish were true. |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Lovely poem, just carried me away with the words, so well written. Had to look up the word “aperitif” though, but I like when a poem teaches me something too. Bill |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy - You're the best dreamer... You know I love reading each and every one of your wonderful poetic repasts...  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, your visions are always filled with such sweetness and loves beauty! (smiles) Dreams can come true, sweet friend, and you are destiend to love her forever as your heart beats with suc lovely visions so heavenly! (smiles) Believe in yourself, sweet friend, and all your dreams will become reality! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She visits me on misty nights When moonlight shines in ghostly lights And shadows dance a tango’s flair Like buttercups that twist the air A fantasy of phantoms soar With veils of clouds in silver awe ====================================== It warms me like aperitif To temperatures of disbelief ====================================== It’s there I swear in savoir-faire In daylight I would never dare. But in my dream I reign supreme I make her mine, my loving queen. And though it is a dreamers view It is the dream I wish were true. =========================================== and with this dreamers view...I feel the tingles of de-ja-vu.  *L*and OUUUU LA LA ... I do so love when your Randy dragon speaks french. LOL (works on me like raspberry tea) I have said before and will say anytime I get the chance....seeing things thru your eyes of wise always grants me vision. Things are WAY COOL when seen from your point of view.  This is beautiful Stinky...your paint a dream of touchless touch that reaches across the distances and takes the hand of one who will believe. (ohilwywlt)  Dream on Stinky ...I'll meet you in Shangri-La. ... the one in France (teehee)  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll dance with you around the moon and tango through the night till soon we fall upon our leaves of dreams and count the glitter in moon beams! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Son Netier, Thank you and have an aperitif on me. Nan, There is no one better I would have read my dreams. *L* Mistletoe, Thank you for the helpful wishes. JM, Very well we will have aperitifs in a small cafe in Paris. WW R S Sunshine, Anytime. *L* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so flowing and smooth. Guess what, I have the exact same dream, except there must be an exchange of queen for King. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, A woderful reply LOL *L* Sy |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
when you write romantically, you steal my heart  this is so lovely |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very lovely poem with beautiful images.Nice job! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, If I did I would keep it safe. *L* Sodpossom, Thank you for the nice job. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ohhhh Sey how I love it when you write like this......*sigh* sooooo beautifully done my friend Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Thank you sweet. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Its a date ... dont be late And dont forget to bring Randy so he can speak french *L*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, OH I can make muself understood without Randy Winkiewinkie twinky. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! A masterpiece that this star is keeping. It sings such a sensually perfect melody. **big hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH baaaaby....OF THAT....I have NO DOUBT ROFL *Winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, I'll take the hugs and send some kisses. *L* JM, Sending some transcendental hugs and kisses. mmmmmm Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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