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You Are There, Here With Me.....Lady's Challenge
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You Are There, Here With Me.....Lady's Challenge |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Today I cried, tears of missing you ache wondering how much without you, I could take I smile each day ,hope for you the best keep these I need you still feelings, suppressed memories fresh, like it were yesterday my heart still has much, needed to say some words of I’m sorry, songs of endear little bits of laughter, whispers of I wish you were near and I know somehow that you are ~ there, here with me as I keep you in my heart for all eternity so I dried my tears, on a sniffle and a sigh resigning to the fact, I’ll never tell you good-bye ~SEA~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...you have met the challenge well... Now where is it written about the rules of the challenge...???? I wanno do it tooooo!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl this was utterly utterly lovely. The flow was divine and the challenge met absolutely perfectly. Wonderful writing, and it shows your fabulous skill. Very well done darling girl  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
SEA~Beautiful! Just lovely and a challenge well met! ~Hugs, Nancy~  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You met the challenge well..it reminds me of my Grandma and of someone else I'm still trying to forget after many years. I always seem to relate to your poetry, well expressed Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Susan, this is soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, you always write such beautiful challenges! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Today I cried, tears of missing you ache wondering how much without you, I could take I smile each day ,hope for you the best keep these I need you still feelings, suppressed ============================== Well you just managed to meet the challenge in poetic perfection and sum up mothy me totally. The mirrors in that first verse alone are blinding. beautiful write of longing Sea... your ache muse gave you a gem. Its not like you to say sorry, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
oh how I can relate to this, Susan. Such a sad write. Big (((hugs))) to you, sweet friend. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The beauty of this is knowing that its fantasy..and you make it so believable |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderfully done. . . memories and rememberances. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I don't know what the challenge was, but I think you have certainly risen to it with this one. You touched some very vivid memories for me with this piece. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much.... Janet, I thought of you while writing this and Balladeer, the feelings here are very real, I was also thinking of my Aunt Sue, not a man I miss her every day again, thank you all very much [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-13-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a wonderful poem to meet the challenge...well done SEA...very well done.. |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Awesome write!  beautiful, sad and very loving! Hugs.Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
you get one of these... A W E S O M E  regards, sudhir |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
memories fresh, like it were yesterday my heart still has much, needed to say some words of I’m sorry, songs of endear little bits of laughter, whispers of I wish you were near This was my favorite stanza. It was like I could feel these words as if they were written by my hands. Opeth |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
and many many congratulations on your 11000 posts... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* feelings that flow with beauty from your heart. You have met this challenge with incredible talent. BRAVO!!!!Your heart is singing in your words on this one. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
This one is penned so well, That right into the sea I fell A sea of sweet memories, I tell Is the best place to dwell....  thank you, sea for sharing.... luv & hugs, amigo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Another flowing beauty from the SEA. The challenge has been well met. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and CONGRATS on the 11,000, Little One! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I know your emotions, little one, and you brought them here, there, front and center. You should be very proud of your efforts. I know I am. Well done! |
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