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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-12-14 06:22 AM


Morning kisses light
Finally I am sleeping
My smile is your sun

The air sips on raindrops as the lips of my thoughts
settle warmly on you.
You, the voice that keeps me awake at night
while dreaming people have nerve to sleep
will be my forever one day
and if I don't need you so much
then why would my thoughts keep turning to mirror yours?  

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-14 08:05 AM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Jenn, may his thoughts continue to reflect to you and may true love forever shine in your glowing heart! (sigh) You are his sunshine, as you are an angel to us all! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jennifer, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-14 08:16 AM


Very romantic poem! I loved reading this, keep the love flowing!

     Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2001-12-14 08:34 AM


Temptress,
A lovely write and I enjoyed the read.

Robert A
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4 posted 2001-12-14 02:53 PM


You know this is cool, but somehow I'm always afraid to click on anything that says "tempress"  
Temptress
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5 posted 2001-12-14 04:57 PM


Noah,
As always, your support makes me smile.   Ahh..but I seem to have a knack for writing love poetry, but that is all this is.  
Just poetry, sir.  

Hypnosis,
Thank you so much for stopping by and reading.   I'm glad you enjoyed this. Simple in its wrapping, but my long winded muse seems to have left for a bit.  

Sy,
An honor as usual.   I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Robert A,
Afraid to click on lil ole me? *sigh* Such comes with the name I suppose. Don't be afraid though. The name has more meaning than what one would normally think.  

MERRY CHRISTMAS, DARLINGS....
If you can't find your cup of Christmas cheer, you may have a cup of mine!

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6 posted 2001-12-15 10:05 PM


Well sweetie, you write love well.  And you know - I like the "short-winded" Temptress once in a while, lovely!

~*~  May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~


Startime
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7 posted 2001-12-15 10:09 PM


Oh my how sweetly does romance come from the heart of our dear temptress. With wicked grins and sparkling eyes she writes passion that melts the hearts of all the guys. *giggling* I so love reading your poems that always have a little of the naughty in them. I love it!!!I love it!!! **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amusemi
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8 posted 2001-12-15 10:14 PM


Beautiful piece.  You are very perceptive in your writing.  I hope you are sharing these with someone special!!  That's the best part!
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9 posted 2001-12-15 10:50 PM


Like this a lot, Jen.
Sandra

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