You Are There, Here With Me (Lady In White's Challenge)

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-12-12 05:27 PM

Lady In White thought up a beautiful challenge for us all. You can find her poem and her challenge here:
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I encourage you all to write along too! Have fun! :-)

You Are There, Here With Me
By: Noah Eaton
12/12/01

You are there, here with me
Resting in the moonlight on cashmere sheets
Eden whispers in your eons of heartbeats
Embrace me, my love, we’ll make sweet love in harmony

Hold me close to your beating heart, sweet butterfly
I will suckle the grail of your loving passion
Side by side we will irresistibly lie
Feeling our hearts melt together in loving devotion

I will paint your dreams with rainbow light
In the moonlight, we’ll share this fond kismet kiss
Resting in the bed of destiny, gently caressing your face in the moonlight
Feeling the curves of your dreamy body with locked lips

Your heart is where I want to sleep
Your eyes are where I want to dream
Your lips promote everything your lovely heart sings
You are my angel, you fill my life with ecstasy

You are there, here with me
Hold me, sweet darling, I will share you my dreams
Here in your arms, we will happily weave
A whole new world…for you and me…
My love…

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-13-2001).]

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-12-12 05:37 PM

wow Noah, this is a bit steamy

but challenge well met. I will give it a go later tonight

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-12-12 05:38 PM

love this gem of passion and love.
Well done my dear friend

((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Hypnosis
Member

since 2001-12-02

Posts 325
CO

3 posted 2001-12-13 08:52 PM

Very well done!  I could imagine everything in the poem, I like that, Good job my friend!

     From your good friend
        Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

4 posted 2001-12-13 08:54 PM

beautiful...helen

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-12-13 10:12 PM

A challenge very sensually met, sweet Noah!
~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Joe Lamando
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since 2001-11-20

Posts 124
Massachusetts,USA

6 posted 2001-12-13 10:23 PM

Noah,
Very well done!

Joe Lamando

Rogue24
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since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-12-14 02:55 AM

Very sensual indeed! Great job Noah!

Cheers
Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2001-12-14 09:59 AM

A wonderful response to this delightful challenge! Well done, Noah!

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2001-12-14 10:36 AM

Noah, this is a delightful read. Very well done!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2001-12-14 10:48 AM

Noah, leave it to you to weave such a beautiful poem. This is absolutely delightful. **hugs** Challenge well met.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2001-12-14 11:19 AM

This is beautiful, Noah! A challenge well met.
Merry Christmas To you! And, May All Your Wishes And Dreams Come True!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

12 posted 2001-12-14 11:25 AM

You are there, here with me
Resting in the moonlight on cashmere sheets
Eden whispers in your eons of heartbeats
Embrace me, my love, we’ll make sweet love in harmony
=============================

beautiful imagery and a romantic passionate write.
wonderful response to the challenge...
a lovely turn of phrase.
well done poet Noah

jm

Its not like you to say sorry,
I was waitin on a different story.
This time I'm mistaken ...
for handing you a heart worth breaking.

Nickleback

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2001-12-14 10:21 PM

Sigh...

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

14 posted 2002-02-11 03:59 PM

you make me swoon like no other! challenge well met I'd say!!!!!

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