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peaches73533
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0 posted 2001-12-26 05:58 PM

I hear the melody in my head.
That has awakened the spirit I thought was dead.
It starts out slow and beautiful.
No words just sweet melody.
The notes seem to flow from within.
Reviving my spirit once again.
I hear lots of melodies floating around.
As they lift me from the ground.
Paino, trumpets, and much more.
Make the sound that I adore.
It's like an angleic sound.
That just seems to abound.
It soothes me to my soul.
And I lose complete control.
My body just let's go of all the tension.
As I make this sweet redemption.
For once again my melody.
Has come through abounding for me.
Giving me a new inner self to see.
And be glorious as I can be.

Peaches
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1 posted 2001-12-26 09:54 PM



(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, your loving heart shines in all your beautiful words! (smiles) May love and glory forever shine in you! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peaches, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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2 posted 2001-12-26 10:02 PM

Peaches.....lots of very beautiful and
positive feelings expressed...Keep going
in that direction..
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3 posted 2001-12-26 10:14 PM

I really like the feelings this conveys, very very nicely done!!
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4 posted 2001-12-26 10:19 PM

That's the melody of life you hear, peaches. Only the truly happy can hear it...I'm so glad you do!
peaches73533
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5 posted 2001-12-26 11:35 PM

Noah:Thank you so much.I love all of you very much.You all have helped me immensly.

Magnus:I really am trying.Have felt a very heavy and laden heart lately, but seemed to muster this up anyway.Maybe that means I'm taking steps in the right direction.

Sea:Glad you enjoyed it.

Balladeer:Is that what that isMe to.Have waited a long time to hear it.

Peaches
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6 posted 2002-01-09 11:55 PM

peaches im very happy for you.. nothing compares to the song of truth within one's soul
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7 posted 2002-02-11 03:52 PM

peaches, I'm happy that your happy and we're both happy
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