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Charisma
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Everlasting Love
***

Irresistible
Virginal white hidden grail
Petals diadem
Tempt unknown magic feelings
Heart of everlasting love


Charisma ~*TMP*~

~*Theresia~*  
© Copyright 2001 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
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"Tempt unknown magic feelings"

I love that line  
how stunning Charisma!!  
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(sigh) Oh Charisma, you are sooooooo romantic, this poem made me sigh to the beauty of your words and image! (sigh) Such enchanting beauty of love shines from the petals of your heart! May you forever share true everlasting love as your heart sings with bliss! (sigh) Sooooooo heavenly beautiful! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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3 posted 2001-12-12 04:41 PM

this is nice, Charisma, very soft and delicate!

Carol Luna
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4 posted 2001-12-12 04:41 PM

This is gorgeous, both the presentation and the word choice. I love it.

Nan
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Charisma - you are without a doubt the queen of tankas    This is so lovely!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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it is a song that rises from a bleeding
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6 posted 2001-12-12 05:38 PM

enjoyed
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