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Kevin
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0 posted 2001-12-11 12:14 PM


I would hold you close forever
If I thought It'd make you smile
But I just don't think you want me
To try and make it worth while
So I spare us the confusion
And I spare my heart the aching
Its so hard to take away the thoughts
That I'm yours for the taking
Things are never really easy
Though I try to keep them sane
I'll be outside if you need me
I'll be laughing at the rain

© Copyright 2001 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-12-11 12:15 PM


Kevin,
Beats crying at the pain!

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2 posted 2001-12-11 12:53 PM


*sigh* I know this feeling of waiting for someone who does't want me when there is nothing else that I know better to do. enjoyed.  

I am many.

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3 posted 2001-12-11 01:47 AM


Very well said, Kevin. But don't let yourself get soaked.
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4 posted 2001-12-11 03:14 AM


"I'll be outside if you need me...
I'll be laughing at the rain."
I've been outside laughing at the rain for a while now...
fantastic lines...James

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5 posted 2001-12-12 05:32 PM


so sad......but what a beautiful lines....love it  

((hugs))
Charisma

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