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0 posted 2001-11-16 12:06 PM


If I said I loved you
Down on bended knee
Would you give
Give your heart to me

If I said I loved you
In the pouring rain
Would you ask me to say it
Say it once again….

If I said I loved you
Like I’ve never loved before
Would you understand
Understand it’s you I adore

If I said I loved you
Would you accept that it was free
All this love I have
Have here inside of me

If I said I loved you
Would you know that it’s true
I only want to give this love
Give this love to you


~SEA~



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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2001-11-16 12:10 PM


I don't think any one will say no...

Great work, my friend...

Regards,
Sudhir

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2 posted 2001-11-16 12:18 PM


Sea~Now you KNOW I love this one! Yuppers! ~hugs Nancy~  

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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3 posted 2001-11-16 01:42 PM


If you said you loved me
I'd fall down to my knees
My body temp I'm sure would rise
At least nineteen degrees.

If you said you loved me
My heart's capacity
Would double, triple, even more
And fill with love for SEA.

If you said you loved me
I'd fall down in a faint
And feel I had been canonized
Or turned into a saint.

Oh, SEA, just say you love me
Then put your hand in mine
And whisper those four magic words.
"My hubby doesn't mind!"  

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4 posted 2001-11-16 02:01 PM


Sudhir lyer, thank you dear one  

Nancy, you are so great! thank you  

Balladeer,

hey there poet 'Deer
If you get any hotter
you can come cool yourself
in my body of water

come relax
in my gentle lapping tide
I'll kiss your toes
as my love, I confide

oh yes, my 'Deer
submerse yourself, be free
take this love
from your SEA  



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5 posted 2001-11-16 02:21 PM


And if the man on the moon
said I love you,
would you show him
your five tattoos,
your moon lights delight?

HAHA, couldn't resist. I read your reply to Mark's two tattoos poem.  

But this really is a nice love poem.

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6 posted 2001-11-16 02:30 PM


Midnitesun....you made me giggle like a loon   I liked that   thank you  
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7 posted 2001-11-16 02:31 PM


Susan, romance seems to just flow from your pen, my friend. Beautifully done.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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8 posted 2001-11-16 02:33 PM


this is wonderful
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9 posted 2001-11-16 02:47 PM


Yes

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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10 posted 2001-11-16 02:55 PM


If you said you loved me,
Like you tole Balladeer,
I'd say thank you, SEA,
But, babe, I'm outta here!

Because everybody knows,
That you are a real saint,
Just like we all know,
That Balladeer is an 'aint'.

So go ahead and proffer,
If you think you must.
But I think I would be a better
Person you could(n't) trust.

heh

Incidently, Susan - This is a very sweet poem you've posted.

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11 posted 2001-11-16 02:56 PM


Dee, awww, thank you, you are the sweetest!  

Lorelei,   thank you  

Interloper,  

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12 posted 2001-11-16 02:57 PM


LngJhnAg, sneakin in there, with your cute verse...thank you, you are so nice  
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13 posted 2001-11-16 03:04 PM


That's very sweet.

I love the ocean blue,
and hear its peaceful sound.
I love SEA, the wise lady
Who have seen lots
Of joy in her friends.
Though people said sea is sad,
I said SEA is the most memorable thing!

Lizzy

~A little sour add to taste of life.
~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordina

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (edited 11-16-2001).]

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14 posted 2001-11-16 03:05 PM


Vivian, you are so sweet   thank you!  
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15 posted 2001-11-16 03:08 PM


Sea, this is rather lovely writing.  I like this form to, it's cool!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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16 posted 2001-11-16 03:43 PM


That would be great because love is the goal...James
BloomingRose
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17 posted 2001-11-16 03:48 PM


This sounds like a great love song!
I like it very much.

Deb

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18 posted 2001-12-12 11:08 AM


liked it
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19 posted 2001-12-12 11:25 AM


*giggling* well all I can say is that he would be nuts to not grab you up in his arms and love you for all he's worth. BRAVO!!! I love it. **hugs**


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-12-2001).]

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20 posted 2001-12-12 12:08 PM



Somehow this slipped by me the first time, but not this time  

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21 posted 2001-12-12 12:17 PM


Sea,what a wonderful way to ask these questions.If I was a betting woman which by the way I am.I would bet there is no way they couldn`t say they loved you too

Juanita

[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-12-2001).]

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22 posted 2001-12-12 12:22 PM


Circe darling girl, this is utterly utterly wonderful. It slipped by me too, but i caught it on the up swing. Absolutely first class writing darling girl, you really have outdone yourself here

Well Done

    
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
    
Have a fabulous Christmas and may HIS peace and love bless you evermore

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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23 posted 2001-12-12 12:56 PM




(sigh) Oh Susan, you are soooooooo romantic! I am very sure if you said how much you loved him, he would sweep you off your feet and tell how much he loves you, for you deserve the most beautiful love! (smiles) Romance always fills your gorgeous words, we all love you so much, sweet Susan! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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24 posted 2001-12-12 04:32 PM


Beautiful words Sue...certainly he would
say yes to this request...What man could
resist?

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25 posted 2001-12-12 04:35 PM


This is just too beautiful, brought tears to my all ready wet eyes
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26 posted 2001-12-12 04:40 PM


Sea you are one loving lady who is loved by everyone who knows you. And this one was another Gorgeous gem of you.

Love ya dear lady
(((hugs)))
Charisma

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27 posted 2001-12-12 05:41 PM


If I said I love you too
Will you like it Sue?
Will you take my honest cue
And happily say I do....

Just wondering..

loved the writing....thank you

luv & hugs,
amigo


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28 posted 2001-12-12 05:45 PM


thank you all so much  
and Amigo,   thank you for the bonus smile   that was awesome  

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