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If I Said I Loved You........
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If I Said I Loved You........ |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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If I said I loved you Down on bended knee Would you give Give your heart to me If I said I loved you In the pouring rain Would you ask me to say it Say it once again…. If I said I loved you Like I’ve never loved before Would you understand Understand it’s you I adore If I said I loved you Would you accept that it was free All this love I have Have here inside of me If I said I loved you Would you know that it’s true I only want to give this love Give this love to you ~SEA~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I don't think any one will say no... Great work, my friend... Regards, Sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sea~Now you KNOW I love this one! Yuppers! ~hugs Nancy~  ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If you said you loved me I'd fall down to my knees My body temp I'm sure would rise At least nineteen degrees. If you said you loved me My heart's capacity Would double, triple, even more And fill with love for SEA. If you said you loved me I'd fall down in a faint And feel I had been canonized Or turned into a saint. Oh, SEA, just say you love me Then put your hand in mine And whisper those four magic words. "My hubby doesn't mind!"  |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sudhir lyer, thank you dear one Nancy, you are so great! thank you Balladeer, hey there poet 'Deer If you get any hotter you can come cool yourself in my body of water come relax in my gentle lapping tide I'll kiss your toes as my love, I confide oh yes, my 'Deer submerse yourself, be free take this love from your SEA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And if the man on the moon said I love you, would you show him your five tattoos, your moon lights delight? HAHA, couldn't resist. I read your reply to Mark's two tattoos poem.  But this really is a nice love poem. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Midnitesun....you made me giggle like a loon  I liked that thank you |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Susan, romance seems to just flow from your pen, my friend. Beautifully done. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
this is wonderful |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
If you said you loved me, Like you tole Balladeer, I'd say thank you, SEA, But, babe, I'm outta here! Because everybody knows, That you are a real saint, Just like we all know, That Balladeer is an 'aint'. So go ahead and proffer, If you think you must. But I think I would be a better Person you could(n't) trust. heh Incidently, Susan - This is a very sweet poem you've posted. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dee, awww, thank you, you are the sweetest! Lorelei, thank you Interloper,  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LngJhnAg, sneakin in there, with your cute verse...thank you, you are so nice |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
That's very sweet. I love the ocean blue, and hear its peaceful sound. I love SEA, the wise lady Who have seen lots Of joy in her friends. Though people said sea is sad, I said SEA is the most memorable thing! Lizzy ~A little sour add to taste of life. ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. ~Blessed are those who find ordina [This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (edited 11-16-2001).] |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vivian, you are so sweet thank you! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, this is rather lovely writing. I like this form to, it's cool! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
That would be great because love is the goal...James |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This sounds like a great love song! I like it very much. Deb |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* well all I can say is that he would be nuts to not grab you up in his arms and love you for all he's worth. BRAVO!!! I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-12-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Somehow this slipped by me the first time, but not this time  |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sea,what a wonderful way to ask these questions.If I was a betting woman which by the way I am.I would bet there is no way they couldn`t say they loved you too   Juanita  [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-12-2001).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe darling girl, this is utterly utterly wonderful. It slipped by me too, but i caught it on the up swing. Absolutely first class writing darling girl, you really have outdone yourself here   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Have a fabulous Christmas and may HIS peace and love bless you evermore To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Susan, you are soooooooo romantic! I am very sure if you said how much you loved him, he would sweep you off your feet and tell how much he loves you, for you deserve the most beautiful love! (smiles) Romance always fills your gorgeous words, we all love you so much, sweet Susan! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful words Sue...certainly he would say yes to this request...What man could resist? |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is just too beautiful, brought tears to my all ready wet eyes  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea you are one loving lady who is loved by everyone who knows you. And this one was another Gorgeous gem of you. Love ya dear lady (((hugs))) Charisma |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
If I said I love you too Will you like it Sue? Will you take my honest cue And happily say I do.... Just wondering.. loved the writing....thank you luv & hugs, amigo |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all so much and Amigo, thank you for the bonus smile that was awesome |
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