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amerijuanican
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0 posted 2001-12-12 02:02 PM


Tunes of yesterday's song
  Build my memories.My me
These notes clothe my spirit.This fruit
                                   my tree
But my harvest, brings shame, a prophet's
                                   decree?

To turn this soil, my heart-a reaper's pain
  Another seed.Reach deep.Time gone.No rain
Til, warming sun, this season pass.
                   I pray this not my season last.

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1 posted 2001-12-12 02:44 PM


*sigh* such sadness and a feeling of regret...I too pray this is not you season last. Your poems touch the soul. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-12-12 03:19 PM




(big hugggssssss) Tears fell down my cheeks reading this, my heart cries out to your sorrow. (sad sigh) Always listen to your loving heart, sweet friend, for this is never your last season, for tomorrow holds many seasons of love and hope that He is preparing for you. (sigh) Follow your heart, sweet friend, and you can achieve anything! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) My heart is with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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