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Lucie
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0 posted 2001-12-12 03:34 PM


You ask me what I want from you and I pause.

I want...
all the love in your heart, I deserve it.
all the respect that you have, I have earned it.
all the moments in life that shine bright.
you to hold me far into the night.

I want...
every thought in your mind that you wonder.
you to hold me through my fear of thunder.
every laughter that makes your eyes shine.
your promise that your heart is mine.

I want...
you to reach out to hold my hand only.
you to seek me when your feeling lonely.
you to want every minute to last,
until every moment of your life has past.

I want...
you to live like today is your last one.
you to dance in the rain, and the warm sun.
you never to regret that you lived life.
you to know and be proud I am your wife.

I want...
every memory of you to surround me.
them to carry me through when you've left me.
you to know when your gone that your heart stays.
you to know that I'll love you for always.

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


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1 posted 2001-12-12 03:43 PM




(smiles) Oh Lucie, you are sooooooo romantic! (sigh) Your praise and happiness of devoted love shines in all your beautiful words! May he forever love you and share with you all your heart desires! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lucie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-12 03:46 PM


I am keeping this one  
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-12-12 03:48 PM


yep, and you deserve it, you know when love is real, it's there for you regardless and never ends.  I loved this, Lucy,  

Kathleen (Kay)
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4 posted 2001-12-12 03:49 PM


Lucie - Two wonderful, romantic poems in a row, and nothing about me.  I'm getting worried now.   I know there are dark days ahead for me.  Hugs to you, Lucie.
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