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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-12 12:01 PM

Dearest...

Can you not feel the thundering of my heart
The raggedness of my labored breathing.
Sense the moisture of my shaking palms
See the beauty of yourself in my eyes.

The finest wines have been tasted by lips
They do not compare to yours, I do assure.
The most silky lingerie have graced your hips.
Yet I desire that you wear them only briefly.

Come into my arms, I will give you a moment
A moment which will be an eternity of memory.
My hands will explore and caress you lightly
My eyes will burn with lust as they see you.

Let my feast of your pleasures begin in an instant
for at that time you will become mine, no other.
Your passion will take you to another time.
Your sighs will echo through love’s empty halls.

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

1 posted 2001-12-12 12:03 PM

Magnus, what a beautiful and romantic piece you have penned here. Lucky lady

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-12-12 12:08 PM

Eloise...thank you..pleased that you enjoyed
this.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-12-12 11:10 AM

*sigh**sigh* sensually romantic in every way. It fits with the kind of morning I am enjoying here. Well done, Magnus. You write with such a sensuality that I love every word. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2001-12-12 11:31 AM

What a lovely, and very warm piece...nicely done....very nicely done....

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-12-12 11:45 AM

this felt so warm and soft and so so sweet

*sigh*

loved this

Glenn Logan
Member

since 2001-10-10

Posts 111
Virginia

6 posted 2001-12-12 01:21 PM

I liked this poem a lot! I particularly liked the opening, with

Can you not feel the thundering of my heart
The raggedness of my labored breathing.
Sense the moisture of my shaking palms
See the beauty of yourself in my eyes.

I wonder, though, why no question mark?

Best wishes,

Glenn Logan

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-12-12 01:39 PM

Magnus~
Liking the sound of your thunder~
Very lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-12-12 06:38 PM

Karen...pleases me that this gave you a
good feeling for your day....Thanx...I was
playing zombie when I wrote it...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-12-12 06:39 PM

Lady in White....your comments are warmly
received, thank you.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-12-12 06:40 PM

Thanx Sue...really enjoy your thoughts..
Glad you like this.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-12-12 06:41 PM

Thank you Glenn....my only excuse for no
question marks is lack of sleep....I usually
don't forget most of them....Thanx for mentioning it.

happy that you enjoyed this piece.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-12-12 06:42 PM

Hi Marge, pleases me that you enjoyed the
thunder...A silly expression...guess it fit.

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