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amigo
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the earth school

0 posted 2001-11-29 12:12 PM


Perhaps, first leaf that touches
the ground, knows the return of 'Fall'
For, others only live tinted lives
Playing touch-ups with their falls.


[This message has been edited by amigo (edited 11-29-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-29 12:35 PM


I like this  
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-11-29 01:05 PM


Amigo,
You said it well. Enjoyed

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Gaia
3 posted 2001-11-29 02:25 PM


Very nice amigo! I like your earthy imagery and thoughts.
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4 posted 2001-12-06 10:35 AM


Amigo~
This is indeed lovely~
Such delicate artistry in this piece~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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amigo
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5 posted 2001-12-12 07:03 PM


Thank you so much my dear friends....i don't know how i missed seeing this... .. ..i was delighted   to see your comments...but puzzled that there were none of mine....

thanks again...

luv & hugs,
amigo

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