Open Poetry #17 |
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Dream Catcher |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Dream Catcher By: Noah Eaton 12/11/01 The lady of the moon plays cats cradle Adorning the stars like jewelry on you as your sleep Fradulent white dwarves permeate eternity’s black window Illuminating the dreams of swains on this jewel-crusted eve Her eye is a satin blue follicle, swallowing desires in timeless space Lubricating tarnished dreams, lovers bestowing magic in return Wearing a chartreuse suede dress, trailing shooting stars in pastel haze Holding loves eternal vows in sacred confer Riding chocolate unicorns in violet seas, catching every falling comet Alms of Love beseeched in Dawn’s B-minor unfold Green tea rain sprinkling the garden in a lovers heart, humming organic sonnets Attaching faithful lovers together in timely condole Pick up your needle, Dream Catcher, interweave this vow And make me forever the keeper of her heart Dream Catcher, you have set me free now Free in her loving embrace, free in her arms… |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Wow, this is a beauty. You always have the most wonderful imagery in your poetry. I wish I could write more like this! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox Love You |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I love dream catchers...their very design draws me. BRAVO!!!Well done, Noah. **hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is very beautiful sweet Noah! I really enjoy reading your poetry. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ![]() "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
A very well painted poem, I enjoyed this. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ^_^ -Derek |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, this is so visually beautiful. Even more so than usual, and that is going some ![]() Sandra |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
amazed by your imagination |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Noah Loved the imagery in this one.Nice job! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You paint beautiful visions... |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Dream Catchers, so mystical, so powerful. I like the way you captured the essence of them, great imagery! ![]() Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Noah, this is excellent, I love the imagery you create, superb. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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