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0 posted 2001-12-11 08:02 PM



Dream Catcher
By: Noah Eaton
12/11/01

The lady of the moon plays cats cradle
Adorning the stars like jewelry on you as your sleep
Fradulent white dwarves permeate eternity’s black window
Illuminating the dreams of swains on this jewel-crusted eve

Her eye is a satin blue follicle, swallowing desires in timeless space
Lubricating tarnished dreams, lovers bestowing magic in return
Wearing a chartreuse suede dress, trailing shooting stars in pastel haze
Holding loves eternal vows in sacred confer

Riding chocolate unicorns in violet seas, catching every falling comet
Alms of Love beseeched in Dawn’s B-minor unfold
Green tea rain sprinkling the garden in a lovers heart, humming organic sonnets
Attaching faithful lovers together in timely condole

Pick up your needle, Dream Catcher, interweave this vow
And make me forever the keeper of her heart
Dream Catcher, you have set me free now
Free in her loving embrace, free in her arms…

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-11 08:23 PM


Wow, this is a beauty. You always have the most wonderful imagery in your poetry.
I wish I could write more like this!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

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2 posted 2001-12-11 08:26 PM


I love dream catchers...their very design draws me. BRAVO!!!Well done, Noah. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-11 08:42 PM


This is very beautiful sweet Noah!
I really enjoy reading your poetry.
~Hugs, Nancy~  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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4 posted 2001-12-11 08:44 PM


A very well painted poem, I enjoyed this. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ^_^

-Derek

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5 posted 2001-12-11 10:07 PM


Noah, this is so visually beautiful. Even more so than usual, and that is going some  
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6 posted 2001-12-12 07:30 PM


amazed by your imagination
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7 posted 2001-12-12 07:32 PM


Noah

Loved the imagery in this one.Nice job!

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8 posted 2001-12-12 07:47 PM


You paint beautiful visions...
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9 posted 2001-12-12 07:58 PM


Dream Catchers, so mystical, so powerful. I like the way you captured the essence of them, great imagery!  
Ter.

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10 posted 2001-12-12 08:07 PM


Noah, this is excellent, I love the imagery you create, superb.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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