Linger in my heart as a memory

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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-11-14 03:38 PM

Linger in my heart…
A welcome visitor
And I shall process thoughts
Of our last meeting

Did you realize
Your touch warmed me?

Or that your words
Disarmed me?

That you left me
A little undone

Before you left
In light of sun

And now you linger here
Your name on my lips
Still feeling that sweet touch
Of lightest fingertips

Still warm
Disarmed
Undone

Still yours

now but a bit of memory
still I touch the you in me
for you left your kindness
in your words
and still the sound
is welcome,
and heard

a repost, revised, in memory...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-11-14 03:50 PM

(sigh) Oh lady, you are always soooooooo romantic, this piece had me crying to feel the love of your heart even when it's just a memory! (sigh) He will always love you, sweet friend, as will your loving heart will embrace love again eternally! (kiss on cheek) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-11-14 04:04 PM

LadyInWhite~
Just lovely, it is~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-11-14 04:10 PM

Fabulously beautiful! What a lucky man he is!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-11-14 04:33 PM

I like to be left a little undone...James

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-11-14 04:39 PM

Lady in White~This write is so delicate.. and oh so softly penned that you almost want to whisper it as you read. Incredible thoughts here...with a sense of longing...wistful and beautiful. Hugs, Nancy

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06

Posts 168
California, USA

6 posted 2001-11-14 04:46 PM

Absolutely Beautiful! regards, Robert

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-11-14 07:54 PM

and still lingering. . . and always will, perhaps. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-11-14 09:21 PM

That you left me
A little undone

Before you left
In light of sun

And now you linger here
Your name on my lips
Still feeling that sweet touch
Of lightest fingertips

Still warm
Disarmed
Undone

Still yours
==================================

Lady ... Lady .... Lady...
this falls like rose petals on satin sheets..
this is sooooo feather light and lacey.
Lovely ... Lovely ... Lovely

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2001-11-14 10:39 PM

OhOh, this is making me cry. Now stop that, I am suppose to be the new, all strong and powerful..
This is so so beautiful.
Sigh
Sandra

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2001-11-15 03:14 PM

Oh my! (this seems to be my constant comment doesn't it?) well, this got me...

"now but a bit of memory
still I touch the you in me
for you left your kindness
in your words
and still the sound
is welcome,
and heard"

Oh my!

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2001-12-12 02:57 AM

Lady In White-
   Absolutely beautiful, my friend.
   Love this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

12 posted 2001-12-12 07:21 AM

Wonderful words, all the way...

Regards,
sudhir

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

13 posted 2001-12-12 08:08 AM

Beautiful writing of your memory. That last verse sings like a sad love song. Lovely.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

14 posted 2001-12-12 11:12 AM

What a lovely surprise to see this one pop back up, thanks to Vicky...and thank you everyone, for coming in for a peek!

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2001-12-12 02:25 PM

So soft and lovely.... this is beautiful! *S*

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

16 posted 2001-12-12 02:41 PM

And he left a lasting print on your heart that inspired words that glow with the feelings stirred. Amazing. I hope he realises just how lucky he is. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

17 posted 2001-12-12 08:08 PM

Lady..the delicate touch of some, leaves an impression on the heart, it seems. You have written of it perfectly!

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