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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Response She is the torch that lights my goal That rights the searching of my soul. The warmth of air the bright of share The green that fills my valley fair And though I speak in corporal terms It’s only dream I can confirm. A land of fantasy holds throne Only this is my very own. She is my queen of soft delight That titillates my day and night And grants me nectar flowers gift To give me strength and give me lift. She colors my wings with hues and strand With brushes dipped in rainbows grand. And speaks to me such tender sigh Sweet songs that make my head to fly. Her lullaby sooths sweet my ID So I’m once more a naïve kid. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful thing to read on a grey morning. She is a fortunate lady indeed to have these words written about her, these feeling felt for her. Gorgeous Seymour If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Awwwwwwww, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet Seymour, I know just how it must feel to make sweet love feel like you're young again! (sigh) May she forever paint your wings with rainbow laughter and set your heart singing in loves rapture forever! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Seymour, this is sooooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A "kid" with sagacity... write on... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tracey, Thank you for the gorgeous. *L* Mistletoe, I am happy with the dream. Sunshine, The sagacity could not grow without your sunshine. *L* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful work... regards, Sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you my friend, Sudhir |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Expressed with brushstrokes of love Seymour hey heres looking at you kid , for I hope there is a little kid in all of us Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, Thanks for the look. And the kid says thanks. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
She is the torch that lights my goal That rights the searching of my soul. ====================================== A land of fantasy holds throne Only this is my very own. She is my queen of soft delight That titillates my day and night =================================== She colors my wings with hues and strand With brushes dipped in rainbows grand. And speaks to me such tender sigh Sweet songs that make my head to fly. Her lullaby sooths sweet my ID So I’m once more a naïve kid. ======================================= *SIGH* YES ... I must agree with the poet above who said "she" is very lucky" "She" is indeed very lucky and Im SURE "she" is very touched and grateful. Why...I'd bet my winkies on it *L* Your as young as your dreams ... they grant you wings. Tis never naive to ... simply believe. BEAUTIFUL poem Stinkylove (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)  *winkiewinkie*  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are just the best cadence-man there is~ What a delightful SAY IT AGAIN OUT LOUD poem~ Blessings to you dear poet~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your sigh is all the seed I need Even if it only moon seed. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Marge, Hugs and kisses back. *L* Vandana, Thank you for the enjoy. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is very, very nice! Kathleen (Kay) |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Cool, totally cool!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kathleen, Thank you for the very very. *L* Amusemi, Thank you for the cool. |
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