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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-11 06:54 PM

you displace your anger
on the wrong person
they
are not to blame
and all the commotion
you have caused
you
alone wear the shame

when you have all
that you do
and still look
for so much more
you lose
the very thing you had
and the future surprises
it had in store

cant say
that you are sorry
and continue
the same old something
all the apologies
that you have made
now subtract and add
up to nothing

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-11 06:57 PM

BRAVO!!!!What a unique way of saying it. Wonderfully penned and very heartfelt. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Rusty Knight
Member

since 2001-08-29

Posts 414
Texas

2 posted 2001-12-11 07:04 PM

A nice way to tell someone they are a zero. If there is a nice way *S*

Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2001-12-11 07:11 PM

h,
I like these lines the best:
"and the future surprises
it had in store"
Captures the unmeasurableness of such a loss.
e

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-11 07:30 PM

(sigh) Yes, it's so very sad to see people saying they're sorry when they don't mean it by heart. (sigh) Love is the only thing that can make apologies happen, and your loving heart shines with them! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet Helen! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-12-11 10:43 PM

words well spoken helen. . .

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