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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-12-11 10:10 AM


     



A
Star
Came to Us
From the heavens, that We
Might Behold
His Love
For
M
a
n



And thus             His Love
Became               His Gift
To have                To Hold
To cherish and to share with All
A reminder that He died for our Sins
That we may forever Live.




[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-11-2001).]

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EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2001-12-11 10:42 AM


yup gotta respect that. well said, sunshine

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

LngJhnAg
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2 posted 2001-12-11 10:50 AM


Written as only a loving woman could write it, sweet Karilea.  Very well done.
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3 posted 2001-12-11 08:19 PM


Excellent, Karilea!  Jesus is indeed Lord!  

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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4 posted 2001-12-11 08:37 PM


*sigh* stunning......this is so very beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. You have said it right, dear one. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-12-11 08:41 PM


THANK YOU KARILEA....THIS IS MAGNIFICENTLY
DONE AND PERFECTLY SAID...

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6 posted 2001-12-11 08:43 PM


This poem touched a bit of my heart with God's light. Good work. ^_^

-Derek

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7 posted 2001-12-11 08:49 PM




BRAVO!!! (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Karilea, this poem brought tears to my eyes to feel the love of Him and the love that always glows and guides us all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, your words shine with the brightest love and your heart echos with His words and parables of Love! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2001-12-11 09:23 PM


Karilea, Your writing always touches me.
Peaches

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9 posted 2001-12-11 09:47 PM


Indeed, so very hopeful and beautiful. Thank you for this reminder we all sometimes need.

Emily


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10 posted 2001-12-11 10:42 PM


now this is writing at it's best. . . wonderfully done my friend. . .  

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