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ctowen
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0 posted 2001-12-11 06:31 PM


Stranger Among Us

From an unaccustomed universe,
the remoteness of certain space,
an unknown quality dwells with us
that is feared to end our race.

Mysterious influences,
extraordinary strengths,
hidden feelings that controls
what the mind thinks.

Impressing emotions,
excited states,
respective realities
that the stranger creates.

At a second look, an inward glance,
its hard to see through all the fuss
that the unknown we fear has been within,
the stranger among us.

© Copyright 2001 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2001-12-11 06:35 PM


Very true Craig...said well.
Thanx.

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2001-12-11 06:52 PM


Craig,

     You poems are so wise and true. Very well written and stated

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Startime
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3 posted 2001-12-12 10:57 AM


Oh gosh...did you ever get this one right, Craig. Usually what we fear is inside of us. BRAVO!!!!A message from within. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2001-12-12 06:13 PM


Craig, this is so definitely accurate. Excellent write.
Sandra

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