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Twelfth Moon
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Twelfth Moon |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Snow moon’s thumbnail shard Cupping lucent shadow well Waxing, waning time |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
just beautiful  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Sliver of life smiles Through the shadows of the moon ~ Below, the snow shines °!° Regards to you Karilea, Sudhir |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Beautiful, Karilea. It does get my toes to tapping, however. Just for you, I'll refrain from my usual kitty kicking. I'll not write about that most delicious of pasttimes. I'll not think about the kitties flying. I'll not sense the touch of a kitty on my boot. I'll....erk...help...I...can't...help...myself... Kitties meow loud The moon sliver calls Long John His boot moves swiftly Cows can't jump the moon Neither can little kitties But they sure can fly! heh |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hmm that just about sums it up. beautiful haiku, or senryu or whatever the heck you want to call it |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Stunning, anything about a moon gets my attention! Kathleen (Kay) |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sunshine,I have never understood how someone can write a poem this short and it say so much!  Juanita  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ You know this is beautiful~ Just PERFECT~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the twelfth moon of time shines across all planes of life showing there, our way ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
BEAUTIFUL HAIKU KARILEA! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
"Waxing, waning time." Lovely! Corinne |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Short, but so nicely done... |
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