Open Poetry #17 |
This Time |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
This Time ~*Marge Tindal*~ This time will be forever Our love has room to grow This time - Oh, baby, this time I just need for you to know I'm gonna love you better this time~ Forever in love with you is where I'm meant to be So this time - Oh baby, this time I'm gonna love you ... foreverly~ For the wonderful man in my life~ December 10, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh Marge....you are soooooo goood at writing like this....all the time...not just this time. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Marge, this is sooooooo romantic, your love is going to love you forever...ever after! (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet Marge, I always love your expressions of love! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and don't leave me NEVERLY!!! I'll read you foreverly willingly!! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I really like this, it flows well and it's so wonderfully sweet. I have always believed that soulmates exist - and, I'm sure you agree too. You wear love well, and, I hope that it's contagious - heaven knows that I need some inspiration to start writing those romantic poems again Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marge! You do write romance soooo well. Beautiful! Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Marge, I am so glad you have a man in your life who you can love foreverly...wonderful poem. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Thank you always for the kindest replies~ I so appreciate your comments~ Noah~ Thank you very much~ Balladeer~ You are such a 'dear' deer~ I'll always write this little heart for you to read~ Love you ... *hug* Melissa~ Thanks for the read. Enchantress~ Oh, dear lady ... This time I'm living it~ Thank you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Plum Proud to know you have that kind of love Marge...wonderful, lovingly done write that would make any receiver proud. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Oh, thank you, gal ... I love being in love ... Just keeps getting better with time~ *Hugs* JWesley~ Thank you my friend ... I'm so happy~ I like 'plum proud' ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
simply loverly!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Thank you ... sincerely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl sweet sister of my soul, Yes doesn't love feel wonderful Fabulous writing and utterly wonderfully well written. Yes darling girl Love does suit you, Margie girl go for it. Love and warm stuff as always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shucks Marge what a let down. Hugs and kisses |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- I just LOVE this...'mush' looks good on you. Now...where IS that guitar man when you need him...this really does read like a song. Smiling at your happiness, sweetest friend. Love and hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Shockingly beautiful, Marge...Your happiness shines through every line... and I am very happy for you too! copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Very beautiful You do wonderful things with your mind and pen. ((((HUGS)))) God Bless You ~Timothys Angel *Whatever souls are made of...his and mine are of the same* ~Emily Bronte' |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
This is lovely! It reads more like the chorus of a wonderful song! enjoyed! I am many. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ Feels plum 'mushy' .. and lovely~ Yes, it is the greatest feeling of the heart~ Thank you, hon~ Seymour~ LOL ... Me wuv you too~ Vicky~ Of all the 'sharers' in the world ... I can't think of another I love to share so much with - you know the all of me~ Thank you, sweetest friend~ Lyra~ Thanks so much for the lovely compliment~ Tima~ I appreciate that. Thanks for letting me know~ Siofra~ Thank you for hearing my heart sing~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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