Open Poetry #17 |
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This Time |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
This Time ~*Marge Tindal*~ ![]() This time will be forever Our love has room to grow This time - Oh, baby, this time I just need for you to know I'm gonna love you better this time~ Forever in love with you is where I'm meant to be So this time - Oh baby, this time I'm gonna love you ... foreverly~ For the wonderful man in my life~ December 10, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh Marge....you are soooooo goood at writing like this....all the time...not just this time. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Oh Marge, this is sooooooo romantic, your love is going to love you forever...ever after! (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet Marge, I always love your expressions of love! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...and don't leave me NEVERLY!!! I'll read you foreverly willingly!! ![]() |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I really like this, it flows well and it's so wonderfully sweet. I have always believed that soulmates exist - and, I'm sure you agree too. You wear love well, and, I hope that it's contagious - heaven knows that I need some inspiration to start writing those romantic poems again ![]() Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marge! You do write romance soooo well. Beautiful! Hugs, Nancy. ![]() "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Marge, I am so glad you have a man in your life who you can love foreverly...wonderful poem. I love it. **hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Thank you always for the kindest replies~ I so appreciate your comments~ ![]() Noah~ Thank you very much~ Balladeer~ You are such a 'dear' deer~ I'll always write this little heart for you to read~ ![]() Love you ... *hug* Melissa~ Thanks for the read. Enchantress~ Oh, dear lady ... This time I'm living it~ ![]() Thank you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Plum Proud to know you have that kind of love Marge...wonderful, lovingly done write that would make any receiver proud. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Oh, thank you, gal ... I love being in love ... ![]() Just keeps getting better with time~ *Hugs* JWesley~ Thank you my friend ... I'm so happy~ I like 'plum proud' ... ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
simply loverly!!!! |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Doreen~ Thank you ... sincerely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl sweet sister of my soul, Yes doesn't love feel wonderful ![]() Fabulous writing and utterly wonderfully well written. Yes darling girl Love does suit you, Margie girl go for it. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Love and warm stuff as always Mushy ![]() ![]() ![]() To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Shucks Marge what a let down. Hugs and kisses |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- I just LOVE this...'mush' looks good on you. ![]() Now...where IS that guitar man when you need him...this really does read like a song. ![]() Smiling at your happiness, sweetest friend. ![]() Love and hugs, ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Shockingly beautiful, Marge...Your happiness shines through every line... and I am very happy for you too! ![]() ![]() ![]() copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Very beautiful You do wonderful things with your mind and pen. ((((HUGS)))) God Bless You ~Timothys Angel *Whatever souls are made of...his and mine are of the same* ~Emily Bronte' |
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Siofra![]()
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
This is lovely! It reads more like the chorus of a wonderful song! ![]() ![]() I am many. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ Feels plum 'mushy' .. and lovely~ Yes, it is the greatest feeling of the heart~ Thank you, hon~ Seymour~ LOL ... ![]() ![]() Vicky~ Of all the 'sharers' in the world ... I can't think of another I love to share so much with - you know the all of me~ Thank you, sweetest friend~ ![]() Lyra~ Thanks so much for the lovely compliment~ Tima~ I appreciate that. Thanks for letting me know~ Siofra~ Thank you for hearing my heart sing~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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