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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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perhaps-- Love is lost in that moment when there births an urge to ask-- who held whose palms, and who gave first? --- during my walk back home (from work) yesterday, late in the evening, I noticed this couple, the boy offered his hands and the girl placed her palm in his palm, but that seemed to take a while, and he had that 'Doubting Thomas' look, as if asking: what's wrong? Leads me to ask: if love is that art of giving, then isn't taking without doubt, a part of that art as well. well thanks for reading this ...  [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 12-05-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are beautiful Sudhir...I am a "people watcher" too--I've concocted some strange imaginings just from body language alone. Loved your poem, lovie! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, I know this feeling of watching others and just observing, I can relate to this! Kathleen (Kay) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Excellent ponderings. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
who held whose palms, and who gave first? =================================== Whoa...this is DEEP ... Sud..what a very cool write... SO much touched on with such consisce succinctity... its like a poetic photograph of that moment captured in time. Very very cool indeed.. me thinks its even Brilliant  he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Sudhir, I know just what you mean, love should always be that feeling where both give without hesitation and with a bright smile of comfort and beauty to give and share! (sigh) My heart goes out to all who wish to love but the other won't give in return. (sigh) Very wonderful expression, sweet friend, your loving heart always shines through your beautiful words! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, I agree with JM. A brilliant write. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wonderful write.We can observe so much from watching other people. Peaches |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you hank yout ank youth nk youtha k youthan youthank youthank outhank y uthank yo thank you hank yout ank youth nk youtha k youthan Many regards, ~sudhir~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes absolutely Sudhir...could be an indication of who cares the most or one could be mad and withhold their affection...James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you james... regards, sudhir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sudhir, you have so much insight. I always will be treated to words of deep meaning when reading you...and come away in deeper thought. Regards, ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you lots... Wynter... regards, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I enjoy your writing Sudhir ... this was such a tender thought. You read people well my friend, a lovely read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sudhir, I so much enjoy your little glimpse at life. You notice the most simple and make it beautiful Liz |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you Kit and Liz, very much... Regards, Sudhir |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This poem brings to mind so much wondering and pondering when it comes to love and trust. Thank you...the thoughts you have given me are very much needed. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
You're doing what poets do, Sudhir, observing and pondering...Lovely poem. Cor |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much, Startime and Corinne... Regards, Sudhir |
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