Open Poetry #17 |
Angelic Radiance |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is dedicated to my sweet angelic friend Kim) Angelic Radiance By: Noah Eaton 12/9/01 Amid the silver clouds shielding Luna’s face A warm smile projects from an angel’s gaze Shrouds of feathers blanket a child as she sleeps Her eyes are hemmed with gossamer stars which she receives She holds a Bible under her arm, bookmarked with a blue rose Syringe of faith perforating the unrest that encumbers below Her caresses her cotton cheek with a glove of porcelain Curfews compensated for promises sparkling within And the angel whispers in her ear, “I will spread my wings, And guide you with all my heart’s content and make you all you can be!” Fear not, your spirit will always rest in Hands of Light Your wings shall be brandished in bronze, bringing love to many eyes So the angel spreads her wings, wearing the northern lights like a scarf Wearing the stars like a nightgown, swaying embers afar Resting another gentle spirit in His carriage Holding loves notion to devotion, reflecting the light’s prowess In the night the angel took flight Offering guidance to each and every spirit blithe Loves spirit singing from a child’s soul In the arms of an angel, shining pure as gold [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunningly beautiful, Noah. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Ooohhh this is heavenly! Very very beautiful gem you've penned here! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah, what a beautiful Christmas story you have penned for us here. YOU have a pure heart and a very giving, loving nature. ~Hugs sweetie! Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"So the angel spreads her wings, wearing the northern lights like a scarf Wearing the stars like a nightgown, swaying embers afar Resting another gentle spirit in His carriage Holding loves notion to devotion, reflecting the light’s prowess" Oh my ... such beautiful description Noah! Lovely imagery and phrasing, I very much enjoyed this wonderful piece! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is very nice Noah...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you for sharing this beautiful gem my dear friend, love it very much (((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Such imagery I would expect on a canvas you have brought before our eyes in words. Bravo! You truly have a talent for write! HUGS! Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
You are amazing, Noah. Joyce |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Ah, Noah, another poem which shows your true talent in the poetry world. The description is very nice. Keep up the good work my friend! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is tender and very beautiful write Noah....thanks for sharing! Nathan |
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