Open Poetry #17 |
The Phantom of the Forum...Whispers I Give... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I walk the halls of loneliness, in search of broken hearts. I gently whisper a caress, in hope that love again starts. My shadow befalls you all, as my mind reads the ink. A heart reaches out to each, to help feel well and think. Romantic words of softest love, I leave inscribed in there as I wander in search of a poetess with whispers of care. The darkness of my cape hides me as my words do fall. From my mind I give you hope, that love will once again call. For each of you deserve the best, no scorn should you feel. And the Phantom of Blue Walls will say words that heal. But now I must depart the halls, the walls no longer blue. And to each poetess in need, soft whispers I do give you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) May all our loving poetesses feel true love and sing forever in their words with the beauty of roance! (big hugggsssssss) So well expressed, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* *sigh* though you are not my phantom lover you give me hope that he exists and that someday he may in reality become flesh. Oh Barry this poem is absolutely wonderful and I am so glad that a phantom love now walks the blue halls of Passions...giving love and comfort to all us poetesses here. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Absolutely beautiful. Breathless. Rare. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
and your whispers, are so soft..... very nice |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...thank you as always...have a very Happy New Year up in the mountains... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...I hope that some day...you will find that love...One which will respect you and adore you as you so well deserve..... And the Phantom walks on... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you seraphin....glad you stopped by to comment...Happy New Year to you and all of your Family and Friends... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh yes Sue...they are quiet as the softest breeze flowing across your skin.... Thanx... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is such a tender compassionate write, and gently whispered. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you MidNiteSun....and I hope that your New Year brings happiness to you and yours.. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Mr. "M": "For each of you deserve the best, no scorn should you feel. And the Phantom of Blue Walls will say words that heal. But now I must depart the halls, the walls no longer blue. And to each poetess in need, soft whispers I do give you." You are such a romantic. Love it, and as I roam the halls, I will not feel alone as I will know that you are there with me. Thank you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And now Magnus, Will the real phantom of the blue walls please show himself! Bless you...I think you already have. And a Happy New Year to you, Mr. Phantom. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ariana...if I can do something that puts a smile on someone's face...then I have done something for me too...Thank You... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Madame C. Oh Geeeeee...Now the Phantom is out of the bag...What am I gonna do now? Thank You..Have a wonderful New Year... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Write on, good poet, write on... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And we will....thanx Karilea... Have a happy N.Y. Best to you |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus, breathtaking write. floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank You Floria...happy that you enjoyed this... Happy New Year to you and yours.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, you have said this so beautifully. We do indeed yearn for the phantom. Your romantic words are always so soothing. Happy New Year Sandra |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Truly a gentle spirit flowing from your pen. One of healing, one of grace. Your words touching many hearts. ***Ivy Rose |
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