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Emotions Tumble |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Emotions Tumble Deep within her own thoughts still not really focused just letting them flow directionless much too afraid to let one surface Emotions tumble over each other swaying back and forth from high to low leaving behind a hollowness with a sense of loss and confusion Sun warms the face not reaching the heart only shining on the surface missing the cold emptiness Thoughts stop where the pain resides starting tears that fall from the heart making their way to flow from eyes now blind to all else around Emotions tumble out as understanding comes to a heart who would not hurt one who has become so precious she pulls away the heart still given Karen Torbiak © Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Indian-giver  Sadly beautiful and revealing. I loved it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
To be praised by you is a precious gift indeed. I am glad you found it revealing. Thank you...   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Karen, it saddens me to see you feeling like this; I pray that your tumbling emotions will soon again rise to the everlasting scream of joy and faith! (sigh) May your loving heart shine! (kiss on cheek) My heart is with you always, sweet friend! You have suhc a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful yet sad write! Your heart, your soul I read when you write. You have quite a talent to express your emotions! May love be your sunshine, your warmth and your comfort. May the cold and sorrow escape your being, leaving you with happiness and joy, a feeling you truly deserve. HUGS  Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Noah...thank you...I just get too emotional sometimes...it will pass and I will survive...I always do..**hugs** Rogue24...your words felt like a prayer to me. Thank you, the gentle feelings you convey are much welcomed. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
I didn't find it revealing particularly, only very soft, very sad.....such a reflective piece. Carol Luna |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Karen,you have a such a wonderful talent expressing your feelings.   Juanita  [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (edited 12-10-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
It can feel so emotional sometimes, this is well done, and the feelings understood. Take care of yourself. Sandra |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sun warms the face not reaching the heart... THAT is poetry! Beautiful writing, Karen  |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
My dearest and lovely poetess Lady Karen, your words here are so very powerful and express the emotions of a very beautiful woman and loving human being, Loved this! Your knight, friend, and poet, always and forever! Sir Robert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen, a beautiful write as always, yet sad. WoW! You have your very own knight?! Sir Robert..*see above  *That's enough to make any woman smile. Hugs, Nancy "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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