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Equinox and Paradox
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Equinox and Paradox |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Equinox and Paradox When a poet takes a ladies hand In clasp above the timeless sand They bond beyond eternals rim Be it real or dreamer’s whim. Their entity turns vivify That flies an endless ageless sigh Shed their stilted corporal seeing Become as one, in their being They occupy a world of sun Become in fact a sum of one The globe is now of colored hue Of greens and pinks and gold and blue. They’re chameleons ever changing Lovers ever rearranging From butterflies of festal awe To stars that shine the evermore They float upon the equinox And live above the paradox. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"They occupy a world of sun Become in fact a sum of one" This is absolutely delightful Seymour! Beautifully flowing in cadence and rhyme, with such lovely and rich sentiments. A wonderfully lyrical write, very much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is so cleverly written, I love it! (sigh) Hearts will melt together as one as two hearts open like butterflies from loves cocoon, embraciing in hearts garden! (sigh) I LOVE IT!!! Your words are always sooooo enchanting, we all love you so very much, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Last year I printed out The Golden Key as a Keeper...I think for 2001, I shall print this out, as a Keeper... 'cause it is! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, A delightful comment, thank you so much. *L* Mistletoe, Thank you for the lovely reply. Sunshine, Your sun lights my day. *L* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* your poetry is always so delightful penned.....truly a treat to read. Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, It is my delight that you read me and comment. *L* |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Would pick out my favorite lines, but what's to throw away??? You have strolled that magical beach . . . and taken us along. Thanks, Seymour |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krawdad, Enjoyed the comment, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When a poet takes a ladies hand In clasp above the timeless sand They bond beyond eternals rim Be it real or dreamer’s whim. Their entity turns vivify That flies an endless ageless sigh Shed their stilted corporal seeing Become as one, in their being They occupy a world of sun Become in fact a sum of one ========================================= From butterflies of festal awe To stars that shine the evermore They float upon the equinox And live above the paradox. ========================================= *you know I am smiling at Krawdad's reply*  ~~~~~~~~~~ ~When A Lady Takes A Poets Hand~ When a lady takes a poets hand ... together they walk upon beaches of understand. In gifted verse and treasured rhyme he engraves this time with words sublime. When a lady sees the world thru a poets eyes ... his vision grants her the reprise of his wise realize. Upon whispered whim of wisdom's pen ... what was before ... will become again. When a lady reads between her poets lines ... 'tis there his rhymes define, his heart light shines. Like an artist he paints from inkwells of gold, pen stroked masterpieces for her heart to hold. When a lady takes a poets hand ... he'll build her castles in the sand Her every wish ... his command ... and he will forever be her moments grand.  ~*~  ~*~  *winkiewinkie*  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Good grief, Janet Marie!! How am I supposed to reply after you...sigh! I loved the poem, Sy..just take my word for it. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sy, you say it so well |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very well said my friend! Stevie |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Seymour, Very well done and rich. Enjoyed it. Roger |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"They float upon the equinox And live above the paradox." And that, sweet poet, is profound. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Seymour,I sould see everything turning beautiful in this poem.    Juanita |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
How very beautifully your words sing the truth of this. I love this poem..it fits so well and made me smile in agreement. **hugs**  Very well said.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HEY Sy-babers... Congrats on 9000 too ... I bet you thought ya could sneak thru where ya me sweet Stinky  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, So glad you liked the poem, I think I write just to read your answers. Love Sy Martie, I take your word for it. *L* Interloper, Thank you for the said it well. Sodpossom, Thanks for the well said. True Reflections, Thanks for the well done. Midnitesun, Thanks for the profound. *L* North Carolina Girl, Thank you juanita. Startime, Thanks for the hugs. *L* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy - this is perhaps the finest poem that you have ever gifted upon us, I absolutely love it! It's sheer beauty and grace, you have such a grand way with words in this, it will be a classic! and Janet Marie - I also love your poem! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Oh, My, but this is beautiful, Sir! You do this so well! I am many. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are a poem. Love ya Melissa, From a poet of your caliber, this is a compliment. Thank you and *L* Siofa, Thank you for the beautiful. |
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