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Open Poetry #17

One Hour or So

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-12-11 03:31 AM

One Hour
or So

I would love
nothing more
then to kiss
you on the lips.
Tenderly soft
and sensually slow.
Top and bottom
for one hour
or so.

Then we could get down
to the real business
of making love.
We'll go halfway
to heaven
until the moon
and the stars
share the caress
of our love.

JamesLee
December11
2001

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

1 posted 2001-12-11 03:40 AM

tenderly and tastefully expressed wishes.

enjoyed!

I am many.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-12-11 09:19 AM

so romantic James

here.........

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 2001-12-11 10:14 AM

Lovely write!

Nathan

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

4 posted 2001-12-11 10:24 AM

Good write, James - An hour of kissing ought to do it...yep.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-12-11 11:49 AM

Ah, the task at hand...yes, James Michael,
now I'm going to be thinking about that hour all day long....

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2001-12-11 11:56 AM

(smiles) Oh James, you are soooooooo romantic, your love for her shines in this lovely poem that will make your love swoon eternally! (sigh) Sooooooo sensual and pretty! I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Son Netier
Member

since 2001-12-11

Posts 116
The Garden State

7 posted 2001-12-11 12:04 PM

James,
You must have patience and well as a fine writing skill, to kiss for an hour. I truly enjoyed this poem of yours and will look for more of yours in the future.

Bill

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