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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-12-10 05:01 AM


Love Uninspired

So you don't
want my love.

Allright...
I think that
can be arranged.

Love shouldn't go
where it's discouraged
to be what love is.

What could
possibly be gained?

My love wants to see
your heart loving mine.
My heart is weary
of feeling pain.

My love has a need
to be accepted and desired.

My love works best
when it's appreciated
and inspired.

JamesLee
December10
2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 12-10-2001).]

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arthur
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england
1 posted 2001-12-10 05:19 AM


very true
love grows best in the warmth of anothers love

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-12-10 06:36 AM


"My love has a need
to be accepted and desired.

My love works best
when it's appreciated
and inspired."

Beautifully captured James ... very nicely written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Bec
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since 2001-02-23
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Canberra
3 posted 2001-12-10 07:39 AM


James...

My love works best
when it's appreciated
and inspired.

So very true. The heart needs perfect conditions to perform. Why settle for less?  

Bec  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

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4 posted 2001-12-10 08:40 AM




(sigh) Oh James, this is so very true indeed! (sigh) My heart goes out to you that you still yearn for sweet love you deserve, but I'm also so proud you are searching for the love that your golden heart desires, who can accept and love you forever! (sigh) She will be a very lucky woman, sweet friend, your heart shines with love always! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-12-10 02:15 PM


James,

I couldn't have said it better if I tried.  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

Corinne
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state of confusion
6 posted 2001-12-10 02:16 PM


Wise words, James.

Cor

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7 posted 2001-12-10 03:50 PM


Oh James, you are going to find your dream woman real soon and she is going to be everything you've hoped for and more!

Startime
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8 posted 2001-12-10 05:41 PM


I totally agree.....love must be nutured by both so that it can grow to its full beauty. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08
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New York (BK)
9 posted 2001-12-10 06:16 PM


This poem was beautifully written!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Carol Luna
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10 posted 2001-12-10 06:27 PM


This is heartbreaking....

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

Virgo_Rains
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11 posted 2001-12-10 06:38 PM


It is sad and painful when love is not returned...You write of it well..clear thoughts to get your message across..hugs

VR

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