Your finishing touch of love

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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-12-08 05:52 PM

I should have seen it coming
but it left as subtle as it came
Sleepless nights
waiting for love to get home
The carelessness of a lack of a caress
The misinterpretation of a single kiss
The hole we digged in our hearts
created by our own disdain
What else?
Who can repair pain?
After we lose to love
the lack of interest is
a sure bet
And then always leaving
the best for last
Disappearing into the
night your last act
your finishing touch
of love

Rogue24
Member

since 2001-12-01

Posts 111
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-12-08 05:57 PM

WOW! wonderfully written! Love, a hard emotion to express, yet when the words come from the heart, who is to say it is wrong?

Ter.

Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

2 posted 2001-12-08 06:03 PM

"Who can repair pain?"

Yes...who can???
I guess we should always depend on ourselves on that regard...

A touching very well expressed write...

Thank you
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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-08 06:07 PM

(smiles) Oh Walker, I hope this isn't related to an experience in your love life, for it breaks my heart to feel when lovers don't care about each other! (sigh) I pray that it's not what it seems and he's only just begun to share you the beauty of eternal love and is saving the beauty of it for every day! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is a beautiful bittersweet expression of love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

4 posted 2001-12-10 11:01 AM

It is sad when the excitement of a kiss or touch becomes routine....or expected...your poem expresses well!

VR

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-12-10 01:12 PM

And then always leaving
the best for last
Disappearing into the
night your last act
your finishing touch
of love

You've written it well, walker. The full circle of love, sometimes broken.

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

6 posted 2001-12-10 06:25 PM

Whoa! Talk about deep!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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