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crazy4u
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0 posted 2001-12-10 02:27 AM


I told my self that I wouldn’t cry
But who am I kidding and why
It won’t kill me just saline solution from the eye.
That will evoke all different kinds of pain
Trying to cure them causes strain
Resisting, It’s in vain.
Let’s not begin with the restless nights
The irritated lids, the loneliness that bites
as I remember the smell, the taste, the sites.
Yet after the deluge of emotion
And the spirit shattering commotion
I get this foolish notion
That all will be all right…
My heart will surely fight
I will have my goodnight!
Besides what are tears but saline solution from the eye?


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Duncan
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1 posted 2001-12-10 02:42 AM


Yet after the deluge of emotion
And the spirit shattering commotion
I get this foolish notion
That all will be all right…
My heart will surely fight
I will have my goodnight!

So understood.  Sometimes, it's the only way to sleep.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2001-12-10 04:05 AM


Oh how I can relate to those saline nights!
Very well written poem.

crazy4u
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3 posted 2001-12-10 11:33 AM


Thanx you guyz!  
xoxo

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